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Speared Ice

Snow sprinkles rooftops melts into water. Water runs its path to the edge of the roof, water drips, forms a line of ice spears. The water stops dripping, for now it is frozen. Icicles dangle from rooftops, threatening to fall, Shatter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/4/2011 10:40:00 AM
You have made me shiver and it's unusual for New Orleans......Thank you...
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Date: 1/6/2011 9:38:00 AM
You have described our recent snowfall on the east coast of the US quite well with these relatively few words.
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Date: 12/15/2010 7:26:00 PM
very descriptive you brougt alive a picture so well..sunkan
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