Speak No Evil

Six slovenly inebriated men engage in their regular crepuscular activity
nursing their beers with desultory chit-chat in the penumbra of a local restaurant.
One man, whose jealousy of those with opulent lives makes him the most cynical,
is pontificating about the idle rich who live off the backs of the poor when he eyes 
an exuberant woman with obvious halcyon life-style, who enters the establishment,
diamonds on one hand and looking strangely out of place, a young child on the other! 
With an immediate visceral reaction, the man swears venomously at the woman.
She, with a sonorous voice, puts a finger up to her ruby lips, turns to him and replies,
“We can’t always control our thoughts; nor what we may be forced to see and hear.
However, we can control our words. Sir, restrain yourself, and speak no evil.”


Written Jan. 31, 2016
For the "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten word challenge Poetry Contest 
Words used:  crepuscular, desultory, exuberant, halcyon, cynical, visceral, sonorous, penumbra, opulent, jealousy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 6, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten-word challenge WIN!" Love LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 12:40 PM
what an interesting story, andie... finest cheers for your winning write!... congrats ad huggs
A  Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 10:44 PM
Andrea,, Congrats on your ten-word challenge WIN. ** SKAT **
Beaufort Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 6:46 PM
And once the words leave our mouth they are like pillow feathers scattered by the wind--impossible to round up and put back in the pillow. You are quite the storyteller. I love how you use quotations. It is simply amazing~!
Gentry Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Ahhhh Andrea, very well done! Congratulations.
Rose Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 1:01 PM
Great poem with a message, well done.
Lane Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Andrea, congratulations on placing in this contest...a big "Well Done!"
Walker Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Great use of all those words and what a story with a lesson to be learned.
Inman Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 9:17 AM
Cool story, Andrea, and a nice lesson to boot.
May Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 11:06 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
Dillard Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:39 PM
Really nice job with a tough challenge--And, it still read true! RAY
Cheema Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Congrats Andrea! A beautiful story you created with words!
Delaney Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations Andrea: I liked your use of the words and how they fit in unobtrusively with the story. Very creative....SuZ
Scars Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 5:04 PM
Andrea, congrats on your placement *smiles* -luloo
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
May Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 8:32 AM
Brilliant write Andrea..I like how the plot unfolded...best wishes
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 6:40 AM
I was glad I stopped by to read this one from you... Love how you can take any challenge and form and weave a beauty such as this! Great job my friend
Trifiatis Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 2:26 AM
Profound knowledge and mastery of language well displayed, dear Andrea!
Vaso Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Well, I got 2 of the 10 words right off, thank god for the dictionary, so that i can truthfully say! Loved this! I love when poets are creative and try new things, I find it inspiring! Hugs
Milliner Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:58 PM
I knew it was coming!! Great visual!!
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