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Speak No Evil

Six slovenly inebriated men engage in their regular crepuscular activity nursing their beers with desultory chit-chat in the penumbra of a local restaurant. One man, whose jealousy of those with opulent lives makes him the most cynical, is pontificating about the idle rich who live off the backs of the poor when he eyes an exuberant woman with obvious halcyon life-style, who enters the establishment, diamonds on one hand and looking strangely out of place, a young child on the other! With an immediate visceral reaction, the man swears venomously at the woman. She, with a sonorous voice, puts a finger up to her ruby lips, turns to him and replies, “We can’t always control our thoughts; nor what we may be forced to see and hear. However, we can control our words. Sir, restrain yourself, and speak no evil.” Written Jan. 31, 2016 For the "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten word challenge Poetry Contest Words used: crepuscular, desultory, exuberant, halcyon, cynical, visceral, sonorous, penumbra, opulent, jealousy

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Date: 2/6/2016 9:37:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten-word challenge WIN!" Love LINDA
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Date: 2/3/2016 12:40:00 PM
what an interesting story, andie... finest cheers for your winning write!... congrats ad huggs
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:44:00 PM
Andrea,, Congrats on your ten-word challenge WIN. ** SKAT **
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Date: 2/2/2016 6:46:00 PM
And once the words leave our mouth they are like pillow feathers scattered by the wind--impossible to round up and put back in the pillow. You are quite the storyteller. I love how you use quotations. It is simply amazing~!
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Date: 2/2/2016 6:30:00 PM
Ahhhh Andrea, very well done! Congratulations.
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Date: 2/2/2016 1:01:00 PM
Great poem with a message, well done.
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:40:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on placing in this contest...a big "Well Done!"
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Date: 2/2/2016 9:39:00 AM
Great use of all those words and what a story with a lesson to be learned.
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Date: 2/2/2016 9:17:00 AM
Cool story, Andrea, and a nice lesson to boot.
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Date: 2/1/2016 11:06:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 2/1/2016 7:39:00 PM
Really nice job with a tough challenge--And, it still read true! RAY
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Date: 2/1/2016 7:07:00 PM
Congrats Andrea! A beautiful story you created with words!
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Date: 2/1/2016 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea: I liked your use of the words and how they fit in unobtrusively with the story. Very creative....SuZ
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Date: 2/1/2016 5:04:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on your placement *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 2/1/2016 10:44:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/1/2016 8:32:00 AM
Brilliant write Andrea..I like how the plot unfolded...best wishes
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:40:00 AM
I was glad I stopped by to read this one from you... Love how you can take any challenge and form and weave a beauty such as this! Great job my friend
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Date: 2/1/2016 2:26:00 AM
Profound knowledge and mastery of language well displayed, dear Andrea!
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Date: 1/31/2016 11:52:00 PM
Well, I got 2 of the 10 words right off, thank god for the dictionary, so that i can truthfully say! Loved this! I love when poets are creative and try new things, I find it inspiring! Hugs
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Date: 1/31/2016 7:58:00 PM
I knew it was coming!! Great visual!!
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