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“When we fall in love, We’re just falling… In love with ourselves, We’re Spiraling” ~Keane
Speak, and forever hold me in chaos For I will sift my way through the toughest stains of your heart Clipping words in your anger, You call upon me once again And with soft words, I reply in disembodiment So that you may fulfill your frustrating thoughts And you say to me, almost coldly, “Please, speak up!” Shall I hold you in your frustrations, To give my unnecessary say? What shall I speak of, To blow your demons away? Speak, up or down, my friend For my love for you goes beyond my hate for me Stopping my heart from happiness, You call upon me time and time again And with brutal words, you listen in pieces So that I may sink into my absorbing softness again As I say to you, so gently, “Please, go on…” Will you hold me when I weep? When my mysterious silence disturbs you? Or will you continue to speak, As my demons devour me? Go on......please...

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Date: 1/18/2015 2:25:00 AM
The chaos of your love leads to knowledge of a deep, immutable need...silence daring the sword of another's need for you Laura. This poem is loaded with contentious affection, an aggressive passion for sharing fructifying disturbance. This is a lively love! "For my love for you goes beyond my hate for me..." radical love therapy! J.A.B.
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Date: 12/21/2014 6:55:00 PM
Bar none, this is quite an AMAZING POEM. one of the best I've read on this site thus far, Laura. To put into words your experience, and do it in such a metaphoric, and honest way, is brilliant. The imagery, and deep thoughts is all present here. Simply amazing. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:21:00 AM
From the quote through to the end a challenging piece of writing. I congratulate you for your ability to put these feelings and thoughts into words. Well done.
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Date: 12/10/2014 11:48:00 PM
This is so so good Laura, and so brave of you to put those thoughts down here. Your fellow poets should all read this piece since it Speaks volumes as to your feelings and talent.As a victim myself of abuse I am very proud of your courage. Blessing Carl
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