Sparrowlark

Stones are cold to sleep upon, 
but compare what to this when your home is gone.
A mother once singing but long since silenced, 
my father also taken stolen by death’s sirens.
Liberated by those who claim themselves kin, 
beaten, broken and trained by those of darkest sin.
A cold blade thrown towards our enemies like and arrow,
shown a different path and renamed the ‘Sparrow’
Treading a path that most would think seem black and white, 
but nought a thing exists to a bird that must fight or take flight.
Building the tools to save Millennium’s souls, 
one step closer to the flock’s aims and goals.
When darkness falls, the flock will descend. 
Where evil dwells, the owl will tend.
The Raven soars and the Boy of Night flies,
the Hawk leads forward unto evil’s demise.
The story seldom ends for the builder of the arrow, 
a former shadow renounced of his face, now a Lark and Sparrow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/11/2014 7:34:00 AM
Wonderful piece here Josh. I would only suggest that you go in and edit it to get the W with the rest of "where" and the t with rest of "the" because you have written a solid piece here. Kim
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Oliver Liore
Date: 5/11/2014 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I'm relatively new to this, so i'm glad to get good feedback from my first pieces.
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