Sparrow

A jaunty flutter leaps from a precipice of air. An ounce of bliss and fear fixed upon a needful moment. Common little sight, sparrow bright, sparrow blinking in and out.

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/15/2021 1:05:00 PM

As darling as the bird itself this poem. I named my new dog Sparrow, a special affinity for me. Lovely to read you today Eric, mo

Eric Ashford
Date: 11/15/2021 7:11:00 AM

Thanks The Insolent Rib, glad this worked for you.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/15/2021 12:42:00 PM

Hello Eric Ashford, Sparrows are small birds. They do survive the winter. I am amazed by this they are so small. Mother nature must keep an eye on them. Enjoy your day my friend.

Eric Ashford
Date: 11/15/2021 7:11:00 AM

Cheers Darlene and blessings.