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Sparks of Desire

when your lips meet mine will sparks of desire ignite flaming in my waiting heart? your embracing arms bathe me in serenity I feel the warmth of your love

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/19/2021 10:34:00 AM

So tender, cozy and powerful all at the same time Milt. Congratulations on your win.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/19/2021 11:17:00 AM

Thank you, Sam. I appreciate your comment.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2021 1:28:00 PM

The right lips meeting will surely create a spark!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/17/2021 6:14:00 PM

So true, Kim, and most of us has experienced at some time in our lives.

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 7/17/2021 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Milton.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/17/2021 12:19:00 PM

Carol, thank you so much for your congratulations.

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/16/2021 11:54:00 PM

I feel like a kid in college again, Milt, wondering if it stems from your college days because it certainly fits my narrative, nonetheless, I value your in-depth exposé of Katuata. My compliments on your winning placement my friend, Aloha!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/17/2021 8:29:00 AM

(chuckle) Thanks, William. Sometimes the anticipation is more rewarding than the actual experience, isn't it? Aloha to you. P.S. I lived in Hawaii for about four years in the early 1960s. I'm sure it's much different these days.