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Sparks Fly

Warm endless kisses 

                hands and toe's wiggle and touch

                                                   gravity holds us

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Elizabeth Bark

Date: 12/7/2010 12:07:00 PM

this is so adoreable! your so lucky that you can share this moment with someone....keep her close to your heart<3 with love always...lizzy.b

Daver Austin

Date: 12/4/2010 7:43:00 AM

Otherwise floating on a cloud, eh? Super Haiku. Love, Dave

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/3/2010 3:18:00 AM

a romance in a trapeze, michael... splendid! hope to see you in my place again; thanks! warmest, nette

De R

Date: 12/3/2010 2:46:00 AM

Very passionate, Michael! Enjoy reading it! Hugs, Emilia

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2010 8:17:00 PM

VEry nice, Michael. Romantic!

Audonus Taylor

Date: 12/2/2010 4:55:00 PM

Beautiful images and word choice right here man. Great Job

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2010 4:11:00 PM

Well keep your fingers crossed that Houston will play the best game of their season tonight and beat the boo birds ..so our boys in blue can have solo spot at the top ...just like your poetry Michael.. J.G. keeping fingers crossed ..haha.luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2010 11:41:00 AM

I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day Michael. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 5:16:00 AM

Nice use and observation of the gravity as an image, Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/1/2010 10:38:00 PM

That's a really cute thought-- love how your title mentions "fly" yet you have "gravity" to hold you down-- but yup love sure can l=make you soar! hope yours always will :) -- nikko :)

M.I.A .

Date: 12/1/2010 7:21:00 PM

Awww, i really enjoyed all your poems from My Christmas Queen till Sparks Fly, Michael. Lennon is also one of my fav. artists, a great tribute you wrote there. Thanks for taking the time to stop by and wishing you a happy holiday season :D

Diane Locksley

Date: 12/1/2010 4:26:00 PM

Very good. Love the second line, Michael. Cute image.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/1/2010 3:17:00 PM

I can feel those sparks flying Michael.. we had a bonfire going on here ..haha.. enjoyed your sweetly romantic Senryu.. easy to write when luv fills your life my W.K. ..your J.G. happy ..forever and always..luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2010 3:04:00 PM

Good one..Soft love and romance work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..I was delighted that you found some good and warm from my work "Honey My Love"..Sara