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Sparkling Refreshing Water - El

sparkling refreshing water enjoyed by my young daughter rejuvenating her soul loving nature is my goal gorgeous hazel eyes meet mine summer day is feeling fine sparkling refreshing water Written 7-8-2021 Contest: Elemental PC Sponsor Charles Messina

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/1/2021 12:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/Haiku write. Have a blessed day with your win writing away..............

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/2/2021 3:23:00 AM

Thank you Paula. Have a blessed day yourself.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 6:33:00 AM

Very nicely written, Caren. I enjoyed! Congratulations on your win! Charlie

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/31/2021 7:57:00 PM

Thank you Charles I appreciate it

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2021 4:45:00 AM

This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/31/2021 7:57:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj

Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/8/2021 8:42:00 PM

Hello Caren, Refeshing Summer Haiku. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/9/2021 3:46:00 AM

Thank you Richard

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/8/2021 12:16:00 PM

So loving and filled with the joy of playing in the water on a hot summer day - nothing better, Caren! Blessings and best wishes for the contest.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/9/2021 3:46:00 AM

I do love being with family in the sun.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/8/2021 9:16:00 AM

A superb Haiku, Caren, your writing is flawless, flowing seamlessly with outstanding language and perfect imagery. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/9/2021 3:48:00 AM

What a lovely comment. I shall print this out and wear it on a T-shirt tomorrow when I see my twin sister.