- Sparkling Oceans Apart -

You're a maiden so hot burning thoughts 
whom melts ice inside deep waves salted 
unfolding ocean swells kissing your feet 
For once spoke those hot lips the truth shining 

Sunshine pleasing warm beholding to 
one's eye golden crowned jewel beauty 
rainbow luster coloring pearl treasure 

It's giving off their beauty pure free 
that does not require something in return 

A lady who pleases the heart warm 
Princess cut with deep class sparkling pure 
utopia's adorable sun rise 

How the body is heated and hear 
her echoing heart beat in the chambers 

Shining a future path dreaming ore 
every single moment precious links 
each one spent with you falling under spell 

Love is like pure sparkling magic gem 
unpredictable true and marvelous 


Magic silk covers batting eyelids 
enchanting soft lovingly flowers 
beautiful petals held within the shell 
Let the rose live forever and the sun 
shines always endless times glistening gold 





Written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne- Lise Andresen 
a co write in a 9/10 syllable count

a warm thank you anne lise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Goswami Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 2:26 PM
I read the poem on Anne's wall...Same comment for you...The poem is a joint creation, but I love the lines so much"Love is like pure sparkling magic gem unpredictable true and marvelous "...Best to you...
Mcdaid Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:43 AM
thank you sandip dear friend love sure is pure wonderful comment heartfelt bless you pal
Chircop Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 7:30 AM
Beautiful poem from our sweet annlise and yourself liam.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 9:01 AM
thank you charmaine wonderful comment smiling bless you dear friend deeply appreciated
Carroll Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 8:37 PM
Good collaboration between you and Anne Liam!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 8:49 PM
thank you kindly ken dear friend was fun to do have a blessed day pal
Trifiatis Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 7:49 AM
I recall commenting on this magnificent poem created by two lovely people and poets : Anne-Lise and Liam, Liam and Anne-Lise and giving them a seven to each. Why my comment is not here to be seen is a mystery! Anyway, I repeat myself and my assessment: Great poem and a seven to each!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 4:38 PM
your so very sweet demetrios truly heartfelt wonderful comment thank you deeply bless you dear friend
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 7:25 AM
Wow! You've penned here such a beautiful and very romantic love poem my dear friend, Liam with Anne Lise! Great writing team you make! Very dazzling write indeed!A 7 for me! Have a wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 4:53 PM
thank you ever so kindly dorian for the dazzling very beautiful comment smiling dear friend bless you this came together a treat for the two of us
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:07 PM
- You did the greatest job Liam ..... and I get the "fav." ...... - And yes, many lovely visits and comments! - I love the poem - thanks again my friend :) - I give you 7 ++++ and a fav. !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:44 PM
together this is truly powerful anne lise your words sang this piece into a higher tune thank you dear friend have a blessed beautiful evening
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 2:34 PM
You and Anne Lise created a magical and very beautiful poem together, Liam! A wonderful collaboration...hugs, Rhonda
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 2:48 PM
ah your so sweet rhonda thank you very kindly wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Bateman Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 1:08 PM
Liam, A most wonderful and excellent collaborated write here with Anne-Lise!! I already commented on her posting of the poem. A definite 7+++ from me Mate!! Good on both of you here with this enchanting poem. (I already Fav'd it with Anne-Lise!!) Again, congratulations to the both of you on this write!! Best Always and Spill Ink!! Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 2:05 PM
thank you gary this was fun colab dazzling beautiful comment pal got the leprechaun dancing in a field of buttercups bless you heartfelt beautiful comment
Manassian Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 8:38 AM
Liam....I love Anne Lise! I call her Sunshine! You both worked well together on this romantic and dreamy piece. Beautiful! :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 10:47 AM
smiling eilleen thank you dear pal truly wonderful comment yeah anne lise sure brings the sunshine bless you
Smith Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 8:07 AM
A beautiful dance created liam ....fabulous
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 10:41 AM
thank you kindly our words danced together just beautiful thank you dear pal for the wonderful comment bless you
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:21 AM
- After the internet ..... world became smaller ..... even if the distance is great - Thank you my dear friend Liam :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:36 AM
smiling just at your finger tips or pen in our case wonderful comment anne lise thank you for your wonderful pen heartfelt appreciated enjoyed writing this with you bless dear frfiend
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