- Sparkling Blossoms In One Star -

My dearest orchid 
Eastern flower of divine beauty
You whisper my name raising the spirit high

Jasmine sweetly kissing air 
In one breath of your aroma 
Drifting thoughts sail over the moon

Wrapped in your passion calling me yours
No matter what may come our way
You own this heart skipping beat 

Dreaming in your starlight
Touched by the dew teardrops of night
Destiny leaves footprints

Purity of truths heart
Sweet miracle of love
I know there is an angel watching over us

Daydreams walking into the clouds 
Hold eve to the late kiss 
This soulful sanctuary sings enchanting heartbeats 

Embracing this Heavenly dream  
Discovering a newborn Kingdom
Always drying your tears reborn beautiful beams







(unrhymed tercets) 
A Collaborated write by
Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 12:11 PM
This is amazing and lovely. Thank you for the incredible share.
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January 25, 2016 at 12:16 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Funom :) - A pleasure to share with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 19, 2015 at 7:04 AM
Neat how the perspective here ranges from close to far away. It's like flying!
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December 19, 2015 at 7:12 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Duke :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 18, 2015 at 1:06 PM
A truly magnificent co-write here Anne-Lise and Liam!! The soulfulness and passion of this Tercet write are matched only by the word picture created from this write and its most wonderful and descriptiive imagery. "TR"/"FAV" Cheers and Best . . . Merry Christmas!! Gary
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December 19, 2015 at 6:55 AM
- Dear friend Gary, many thanks for visiting "TR"/"FAV" and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 16, 2015 at 3:56 PM
Beautiful poetry Anne and Liam, A great collab Anne, enjoyed this wonderful piece!! Best Wishes Kevin
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December 17, 2015 at 5:52 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Kevin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 16, 2015 at 1:07 PM
Enjoyed the sweet aroma of this one..Thanks for dropping by..We usually go see what the grand children got for Christmas but it is kind of different now without all the noise and activity..Sara
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December 17, 2015 at 5:52 AM
- Sara, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 16, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Excellent beauty adorned with beautiful words my lovely friend. 7 i feel.Loved always,bl
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December 17, 2015 at 5:51 AM
- Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 16, 2015 at 9:12 AM
a gem of a piece for you and liam, anne...i feel the wonder of this one.. happy near friday and huggs!
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December 17, 2015 at 5:51 AM
- Nette, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 16, 2015 at 6:31 AM
Very beautiful, smart ,sweet , elegant poem I'm so glad I've stopped by to read it...hugs/dalia
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December 16, 2015 at 7:40 AM
- Glad you stopped by, Dalia :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 16, 2015 at 5:52 AM
From now on whenever take care of my flowers on my roof garden your exquisite verses will come to mind! Another marvel of a poem, child of your collaboration with Liam, dear Anne-Lise! A seven to each!
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December 16, 2015 at 7:41 AM
- Nice :) - Dear Demetrios, many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 16, 2015 at 12:41 AM
Excellent. Beautiful verses and flowing. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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December 16, 2015 at 4:33 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 15, 2015 at 7:28 PM
Lovely collaberation, Merry Christmas Anne Lise. Light & Love
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December 16, 2015 at 4:32 AM
- Merry Christmas, Debbie :) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 15, 2015 at 5:58 PM
anne, you always do so well....then liam's help always makes that easier to tell....the chemistry you share is like a strand of dna....inseparable and undeniable perfection, that's all I will say....awesome job you two....;)
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December 16, 2015 at 4:31 AM
- Eric, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 15, 2015 at 4:01 PM
How lovely this is...your writing compliments each others so beautifully!
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December 16, 2015 at 4:29 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 15, 2015 at 1:45 PM
thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you all a wonderful weekend
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December 15, 2015 at 1:41 PM
truly a delight reading this again anne lise your words always sing a beautiful tune wishing you dear friend a blessed beautiful weekend
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December 16, 2015 at 4:29 AM
- Always a pleasure, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 15, 2015 at 1:07 PM
Well done Anne.. Kindest regards!
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December 16, 2015 at 4:27 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Ken :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 15, 2015 at 7:01 AM
Anne Lise, beautiful lovely lines weave magically with Liam... kudos to both of you!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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December 15, 2015 at 8:19 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, dear Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 15, 2015 at 12:55 AM
"Jasmine sweetly kissing air In one breath of your aroma Drifting thoughts sail over the moon" There is overflowing love and passion. A sweet love poem... (as expected from such a collaboration) ..7
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December 15, 2015 at 3:41 AM
- Nadiya, many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 14, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Hi Anne Lise n' Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a most very beautiful, romantic passionate, dreamy and captivating heartfelt love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Just awesome!Another most very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic passionate heartfelt love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful and sweet.Just wonderful!Very enchanting!I just love it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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December 15, 2015 at 3:38 AM
- Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 4:57 PM
absolutely delightful Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx
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December 15, 2015 at 3:37 AM
- Jan, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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