Sparkling Blossoms In One Star

My dearest orchid 
Eastern flower of divine beauty
You whisper my name raising the spirit high

Jasmine sweetly kissing air 
In one breath of your aroma 
drifting thoughts sail over the moon

Wrapped in your passion calling me yours
No matter what may come our way
you own this heart skipping beat 

Dreaming in your starlight
Touched by the dew teardrops of night
Destiny leaves footprints

Purity of truths heart
Sweet miracle of love
I know there is an angel watching over us

Daydreams walking into the clouds 
Hold eve to the late kiss 
This soulful sanctuary sings enchanting heartbeats 

Embracing this Heavenly dream  
Discovering a newborn Kingdom
always drying your tears reborn beautiful beams

unrhymed tercets 

A Collaborated write by
Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haikutwinkle Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 8:51 AM
What a sparkle you have drawn on this site! Have a sparkling wonderful day dear
Onclaud Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 12:30 PM
and the poetic beat goes on and on.. beautiful, liam and anne.. huggs
Anderson Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 8:00 AM
This paints a beautiful picture... good job guys! I loved it!
Sewumber Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Very nice, indeed.
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Wow!Wow!This is a most very beautiful, romantic passionate, dreamy and captivating heartfelt love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Just awesome!Another most very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic passionate heartfelt love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful and sweet.Just wonderful!Very enchanting!I just love it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each! A Fav!Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers Liam.Keep your Faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Andresen Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 3:15 PM
- Two beautiful poems in two days, dear Liam - I love them both :) - Thanks for always beautiful lines and thoughts - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 2:48 PM
Awwwwww....how thrilling and satisfying. :) I have fed on this beauty and am sated. Lovely
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