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Sparkling At Sunrise

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July 31, 2023 *******************

wine poured in glasses
riesling trickled like raindrops ~
     sparkling at sunrise


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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/11/2023 5:25:00 AM

Congratulations!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/11/2023 9:57:00 AM

Thank you, Kim.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2023 1:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. I appreciate you participating. Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 8/11/2023 9:56:00 AM

Thanks, Sara.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/10/2023 3:58:00 PM

Lin, love this, a romantic one!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/11/2023 9:56:00 AM

I'm glad you think it's romantic, Tania and thanks.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/10/2023 2:32:00 PM

I see it now Lin. Nice! Congratulations! :)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/11/2023 9:55:00 AM

Thank you, Linda.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/10/2023 11:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Sounds like a great time of day. Have a great day with your win............

Lin Lane
Date: 8/11/2023 9:55:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Paula.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/3/2023 11:50:00 AM

So visual and auditory Lin! You have captured the sights and sounds of the prompt words! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings that sparkle like raindrops to you!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/11/2023 9:55:00 AM

Thanks so very much for your support, Sam.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2023 1:44:00 PM

Very pretty, Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 8/11/2023 9:54:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/1/2023 2:48:00 AM

I like that word 'Riesling' - a new word I learnt today, thanks, Lin, a fabulous haiku:)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/1/2023 3:08:00 AM

Riesling is a type of white wine, Jo. Thanks for liking this Haiku.

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/31/2023 1:16:00 PM

Brilliant Lin, imagery of the scale with all the prompt words used up, I certainly have my work cut out with this contest, must take a closer look at it later, all the best for contest, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 8/1/2023 3:08:00 AM

I'm sure you'll have no problem writing something wonderfully wise and win worthy no matter which group of words you choose. You've been excelling with your clever writes lately. Good luck in this contest, too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2023 10:15:00 AM

- Lovely sparkling sunrise, Lin :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 8/1/2023 3:06:00 AM

Thanks for enjoying this one, Anne-Lise. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/31/2023 7:47:00 AM

Pure loveliness! Cheers!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/1/2023 3:05:00 AM

Thank you very much, Kim.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/31/2023 7:29:00 AM

ooh I like this one Lin, with only 17 syllables to use some of the word suggestions make it very hard to write a haiku. I will probably wimp out and do the spider one lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/1/2023 3:05:00 AM

Morning, and thanks very much, Jan. You write whatever inspires you and I'm sure it'll be a winner.

Sparkling At Sunrise

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