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July 31, 2023 *******************

Sparkling At Sunrise

wine poured in glasses
riesling trickled like raindrops ~
     sparkling at sunrise


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Kim Rodrigues

August 11, 2023 at 5:25 AM

Congratulations!

Lin Lane

August 11, 2023 at 9:57 AM

Thank you, Kim.

Sara Kendrick

August 11, 2023 at 1:59 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. I appreciate you participating. Sara

Lin Lane

August 11, 2023 at 9:56 AM

Thanks, Sara.

Tania Kitchin

August 10, 2023 at 3:58 PM

Lin, love this, a romantic one!

Lin Lane

August 11, 2023 at 9:56 AM

I'm glad you think it's romantic, Tania and thanks.

Linda Alice Fowler

August 10, 2023 at 2:32 PM

I see it now Lin. Nice! Congratulations! :)

Lin Lane

August 11, 2023 at 9:55 AM

Thank you, Linda.

Paula Goldsmith

August 10, 2023 at 11:31 AM

Congratulations on your win. Sounds like a great time of day. Have a great day with your win............

Lin Lane

August 11, 2023 at 9:55 AM

Thanks a lot, Paula.

Sam Kauffman

August 3, 2023 at 11:50 AM

So visual and auditory Lin! You have captured the sights and sounds of the prompt words! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings that sparkle like raindrops to you!

Lin Lane

August 11, 2023 at 9:55 AM

Thanks so very much for your support, Sam.

Andrea Dietrich

August 1, 2023 at 1:44 PM

Very pretty, Lin

Lin Lane

August 11, 2023 at 9:54 AM

Thanks, Andrea.

Joanna Daniel

August 1, 2023 at 2:48 AM

I like that word 'Riesling' - a new word I learnt today, thanks, Lin, a fabulous haiku:)

Lin Lane

August 1, 2023 at 3:08 AM

Riesling is a type of white wine, Jo. Thanks for liking this Haiku.

David Kavanagh

July 31, 2023 at 1:16 PM

Brilliant Lin, imagery of the scale with all the prompt words used up, I certainly have my work cut out with this contest, must take a closer look at it later, all the best for contest, cheers David

Lin Lane

August 1, 2023 at 3:08 AM

I'm sure you'll have no problem writing something wonderfully wise and win worthy no matter which group of words you choose. You've been excelling with your clever writes lately. Good luck in this contest, too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 31, 2023 at 10:15 AM

- Lovely sparkling sunrise, Lin :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Lin Lane

August 1, 2023 at 3:06 AM

Thanks for enjoying this one, Anne-Lise. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

July 31, 2023 at 7:47 AM

Pure loveliness! Cheers!

Lin Lane

August 1, 2023 at 3:05 AM

Thank you very much, Kim.

Jan Allison

July 31, 2023 at 7:29 AM

ooh I like this one Lin, with only 17 syllables to use some of the word suggestions make it very hard to write a haiku. I will probably wimp out and do the spider one lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

August 1, 2023 at 3:05 AM

Morning, and thanks very much, Jan. You write whatever inspires you and I'm sure it'll be a winner.

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