Spark the Fire



Sitting here alone,
staring at a cold fireplace
Half of me not home,
left an empty pillow space

Teardrop candle wax
lights the room with sadness
Kindled by mirror sobs,
reflection of an ashen image

You spark the fire
inside of me

You fan the flames hotter ...
with each heartbeat,
it burns deep

Every time you cheat on me,
my sorrow
start to smoulder glow

Then every time you lie to me,
my tears 
become combustible

You spark the fire
inside my soul

Taking my mind places,
I don’t really 
want to go

And the pulse pain burns watery,
scalding blink hurt in the first degree
I’m drowning daily
in a sea of liquid flammable grief
My thoughts drips fiery,
consumed by Titanic bosom misery

Each time I hear the door squeak,
after you creep
In my heart burns a hole

Then when you tip-toe quietly,
and lay next to me
I feel like a shaking volcano

My fiery thoughts
are always misty dawn set
to wet pillow explode

You spark the fire
raging
inside of me

You fan the flames hotter ...
with each heartbeat,
it burns deep

Every time you cheat on me,
my sorrow
start to smoulder glow

Then every time you lie to me,
my tears 
become so combustible

You spark the fire
that burns deep inside 
the heart of me

Don’t fan the flames any hotter,
or it just might make me
become ashes free

And I’d love feeling those 
ember regrets
floating away 
in the night breeze

Yes, I’d love seeing that
fading fire,
of weep desire,
disappearing finally

Floating far, far away 
		in the night breeze
Morn disappearing, finally


11-23-20

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/25/2021 3:21:00 PM
"Then every time you lie to me, my tears become so combustible" .... with every lie burns a chamber within a heart until the only thing left is dried blood. We can only pray that the truth will heal what the lie has damaged.
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Date: 11/24/2020 1:12:00 PM
very poignant lyrics Freddie.... great use of metaphoric language in this one! well done! hugs
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Date: 11/24/2020 12:17:00 PM
Nice lyrics my friend
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Date: 11/24/2020 6:46:00 AM
Next level poetry my friend. Thanks for your visit. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 11/24/2020 3:00:00 AM
I can feel the pain deep within these lyrics. It would sound brilliant set to some bluesy type music. Do you sing Freddie? .....Maria Hugs
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Date: 11/23/2020 11:26:00 PM
Loved your poem and its style. Alas cheating between lovers is rampant. ~~
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Date: 11/23/2020 11:20:00 PM
Brilliant piece..You have woven vividly the feeling of despair and pain of being cheated..Yes, no pain could be deeper than this.
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