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Spark Ignites

beams of hope tendered mirror images refract combustive spark burning ember flames radiant glare recycles residual steam intense stare refuels bursts of energy stokes flame sweet puffs of smoke stream 'Eyes First Meet' contest Stephen Parker

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/26/2011 9:35:00 AM

what a very unique take on the challenge, Stephen :) enjoyed reading this very intense series of senryu :) --nikko :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/26/2011 9:26:00 AM

beautiful senryu on the eyes first meet, Stephen

Jack Horne

Date: 3/26/2011 8:22:00 AM

beautiful words, Stephen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2011 6:27:00 AM

Luv it all Stephen but the residual steam brings back memories of my own luv..good luck in Michael's contest with this brilliant beauty and u need to put your name on poem at the top luv for competition.. and not bottom ..then put Senryu form at bottom under contest rules luv from Michael... good luck..

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 3/25/2011 8:42:00 PM

beautifully penned!