Spark

a spark in the night
battlefield explosions bright
freedom’s dreams take flight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Robb. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 10, 2010 at 5:08 AM
Congrats Robb on having this poem selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. good luck in the next phase luv ...
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May 30, 2010 at 1:11 PM
The image you create is a timely one for Memorial Day. Nice use of the monorhyme form, Robb. Best wishes, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 12:53 PM
So short the poem but the truth is full bloom. Agape, Moses
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