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Spare Me Your Disgust

I suggest, no, implore, spare me your disgust When I am being my self … my imperfect self, For even the finest iron has been known to rust When exposed to the elements it must adjust Like the perturbed perfectionist beside himself I suggest, no, implore, spare me your disgust. For some elements, unlike iron, will combust, Perhaps when aggravated, not left on a shelf For even the finest iron has been known to rust. Your disgust signifies to me your utter distrust Like some oft-abused, imaginary, holiday elf I suggest, no, implore, spare me your disgust. Is it that you covet some talent? If you must, I have none … not even a meagre stash of pelf For even the finest iron has been known to rust. I feel the anguishing pangs of unrequited lust While seeking metaphors alone by myself; I suggest, no, implore, spare me your disgust For even the finest iron has been known to rust.
written February 8, 2022

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Date: 3/2/2022 6:39:00 AM
I was looking at your latest villanelle and found this really powerful one here. Have you written others. I really like the rhymes you used and those repeating lines. They pack a punch!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/2/2022 8:28:00 AM
Over the years I've written several, Andrea. Thanks so much for your kind comment. I do enjoy the villanelles.
Date: 2/17/2022 5:06:00 PM
Hello Milton ... a hard hitting verse stating that you have had enough. Not sure if the message gets through to some though - thanks again Milton - Lindsay
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Date: 2/17/2022 4:09:00 PM
Well, Milton, you surely ironed this Villanelle out very nicely, with a subject matter of excellence, staying true to yourself . . . : )
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Date: 2/8/2022 5:04:00 PM
Very interesting write with a very exacting form Milton. Well done.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/8/2022 5:25:00 PM
Thanks, John. I certainly appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 2/8/2022 4:18:00 PM
Excellent poem, Milt. Tremendous message of truth. Write On! Bill
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/8/2022 5:25:00 PM
Bill, thank you for your encouraging comment. I shall.
Date: 2/8/2022 3:36:00 PM
I like that poem and that style very much! The repetition of lines really makes a nice rhythm.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/8/2022 5:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jeff, for your thoughtful comment. I love the villanelle form.

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