Shane Cooper Poet Alliteration

Space-Time

Wormholes winding wackily in space-time
Time twists and turns endlessly in space -time
Pulsars pirouetting with perfection in space-time
Singularities sitting silently waiting in space-time  
 
Nascent nebula nestling together in space-time
Galaxies gorgeously gleaming spinning in space-time
Asteroids appearing aimless moving in space-time
Comets creating chaos as they travel in space-time
 
Divine deity’s design or quantum chance space-time
Universe unfurling unabated creating space-time
Bejewelled beauty begotten of space-time
Only a poet can promise perfection to match that which we dwell in.

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Teddy Kimathi February 26, 2016 at 7:53 AM I felt like being an astronaut after I first read your work..... Congrats Shane, for having your amazing work featured in the poetrysoup homepage!!!! ;-)

Jan Allison March 19, 2015 at 3:59 PM Dropping back with my congrats Shane:-) Hugs Jan xx Shane Cooper March 19, 2015 at 5:15 PM Hi Jan, thanks for coming back with the congratulations. it is nice of you. A first even if it is at number 30 sounds much better than the N/A i received for the previous contest. love Shane xxx

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2015 at 12:23 PM NICE WIN..PD Shane Cooper March 19, 2015 at 5:16 PM Thanks PD, not sure that a first at position 30 odd is really a win but i Think it very kind of you to dip your toes in my pool. love Shane xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter January 24, 2015 at 12:18 AM Hi Shane! Beautiful pen. You've done a wonderful job here my dear friend with this poem. A 7 from me! Really enjoyed it! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx ^O^ Shane Cooper February 2, 2015 at 6:41 AM Thank you Dorian. I think there is nothing more beautiful and wonderous than what lies in the heavens. love Shane xxx

Cona Adams January 23, 2015 at 6:22 AM Greatly enjoyed this poem, Shane. I do like alliteration. Have tried a couple myself. I will post one today for you. Shane Cooper January 23, 2015 at 8:03 AM Thanks for dropping in Cona, I have written a poem titled daydream which is also an alliteration which you may enjoy and my friend Jan Allison wrote a brillliant piece entitled Scintilating snow flakes. have a wonderful day Shane xxx

Scott Thirtyseven January 22, 2015 at 10:57 AM Wow, what an amazing piece of poetry. Great conclusion, well done. Shane Cooper January 23, 2015 at 7:53 AM Thank you for stopping by. ever since i saw the movie "contact" with with Jodie foster her words in one scene to describe the beauty that she saw haunt me. "They should have sent a poet", that i think is something to aim for. hav a good day Shane xxx

Jan Allison January 21, 2015 at 8:44 AM Great alliteration Shane - quite a tongue twister to read out loud lol:-) Hugs Jan xx Shane Cooper January 21, 2015 at 3:29 PM sorry for the short reply, under bit of pressure this morning. i do like writing alliteration poems. Did not realise the tongue twister part i never read it out loud. thanks for your comments i always appreciate your stopping by. love Shane Shane Cooper January 21, 2015 at 11:26 AM Thanks Jan