Spaceship

Coma like consciousness resurfaces
Enclosed in a capsule shaped sleep chamber
A few vague abstract shapes pass and repass

Overhead LED lights flash response
Feeling for control pressure area
Oxygen floods now obsolete chamber
The glass frame clicks and glides swiftly open
Stepping out Grayson squats to do knee bends

"Hi" and a friendly tap on his shoulder confirms
First Mate Adams has likewise awakened
Refreshed after a dry crystal shower
He meets up with his colleague once again

The onboard computer interrupts with
update logistical data read out
Which lasts approx. eleven earth hours
Grayson takes up his first watch duty role
Familiarising relevant complans
Compiling notes on configurations
While studying the moon's crater surface

Alien report flashes up on screen
Sentient. All O.K. No import flares
Star Planet Ogilvy one light year away

"Hi Grayson", greets Adam's approaching frame
"Any adverse affects from your nano sleep?"
"No Doc", Grayson responds positively
Then automatically checks his stun gun
Noting Adams back view does not compute

A pulsating neck protuberance glows red
Horror struck Grayson then sees it turn purple
As he raises his gun to eye level
Adams then turns unexpectedly
Seeing the lazar ray hone in on him
Smile freezes and registers shock on his face.





 Dated: 9th March 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 31, 2014 at 10:15 PM
THERESA, Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA
Mehta Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Enjoyed your creative write on spaceship and congrats on the fine win, theresa
Stephens Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 10:59 AM
Hi Ram, Thank you for your kind support and comments. All the best Theresa xx
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 3:24 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS YOUR CREATIVE WIN POEM: "SPACESHIP" THERESA !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Stephens Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 4:26 PM
Hi Anne Lise Thank you very much for your positive comments and support. All the best, Theresa xx
Hamilton Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 3:19 PM
congrats on placing Theresa great write hugs
Stephens Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 4:31 PM
Thank you for you for considering this poem in your contest and your kind comment. Regards Theresa xx
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