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Spaceman Come Knocking

spaceman come knocking on my door said he gonna tell the night said he gonna tell the star I said one day soon he’ll be far his eyes were bright but mine were too and he most distant man I’d ever see boots were wide padded suit to see him through the galaxy yet I’ll be here spaceman there opposite points in history with every life in between spaceman come knocking space’s door said he gonna be blood of earth said he gonna go explore and off bleed carry our torch

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Date: 9/9/2024 5:46:00 AM
"There's a starman waiting in the sky/he'd like to come and meet us, but he thinks he'd blow our minds...". Also thought a bit of Starrider by Foreigner. Cool poem
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/9/2024 2:29:00 PM
thanks Tom
Date: 9/9/2024 2:36:00 AM
I liked how you did this, reminds me of a song and for the life of me I cant remember which one!
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/9/2024 2:40:00 AM
Actually I wrote it then changed the style of wording to resemble lyrics instead of prose, so you're on the mark with your comment, thanks Arthur

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