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Space Overtaken

Space Overtaken To many tomatoes fill up my fridge Grown from the garden, a tasty delish When seeds were first sown, did a no show Planted some more, twice many did grow Offered some out to family and friends But they had themselves twenty times ten With seedlings now to many to count Not one to be wasted began to place out Seedlings aligned in the vegetable patch Garden plants nursery waiting to hatch Some in pots and oblong planters Hanging baskets - swaying decanters Nurtured an watered sun on them all Grew so well some ever so tall Hundreds of flowers waiting to bare fruits Slugs and snails hide, waiting to loot Bees humming as they pollinated Tiny green balls soon generated Twice weekly fed grew them much bigger Some so big grew skin much thicker As time went by they started to turn Green to red ripen by suns burn Fast yielded more than could be eaten Gave many away, space overtaken Made soup, mine was just water and pips Oven dried toms but burnt them to crisps What ever I tried I failed miserably Even the sauce was clumpy and gooey Ripened so fast twice daily out picking Got to admit they gave me a butt kicking Next year will buy only plants that I need Instead will grow flowers for insects to feed Then sit in my garden with wine on the table Enjoying the birds and the nests that they cradle Nature is intended to what it should be Left in its harmony and natural beauty. 24.09.20

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Date: 10/31/2020 9:11:00 AM
Hi Emilia,you could make me some ketchup for my chips.lol.take care.simon
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Date: 11/1/2020 1:37:00 PM
ha ha are you sure you want to risk it after my recipe disasters lol, Emilia : )
Date: 10/8/2020 5:49:00 PM
I see that you're a real gardener. Enjoy, Emilia! :) Gershon
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Date: 10/9/2020 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Gershon, I can grow things just lousy at cooking them lol, Emilia : )
Date: 10/6/2020 6:20:00 PM
Can picture this garden so well from this poem. Love it!
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Date: 10/7/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Sheila, glad you enjoyed it and received good imagery, Emilia : )
Date: 10/6/2020 2:25:00 PM
I too love tomatoes, but get them from the local vegetable stand. My husband tried to grow some a few years ago. They came out about the size of marbles. :) A great poem, indeed! ~Angie
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Date: 10/7/2020 8:38:00 AM
Thank you Angie, they seem to like the soil in my garden, do get a few mutants though, Emilia : )
Date: 9/26/2020 9:14:00 AM
Writing what you is the best poetry, as you express is from the windows of your soul.... your poem made me smile....
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Date: 9/27/2020 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Silent One for reading, Glad it made you smile. Emilia : )
Date: 9/25/2020 4:40:00 PM
Enjoyed the imagery in this poem...plus learning all the work yo go through and sharing with others. Good job. Panagiota xx
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Date: 9/27/2020 3:22:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota, always happy to share, Emilia : )
Date: 9/24/2020 7:50:00 PM
I LOVE tomatoes and your poem. It's delicious indeed. God bless you and your growing thumb :) Happy Writing
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Date: 9/25/2020 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Regina, happy you enjoyed, I like the cherry toms best - sweet and tasty. Take Care Emilia : )
Date: 9/24/2020 6:36:00 PM
My whole face is salivating as we read this poem my friend. I love tomatoes in every kind of salad, hamburger, chili, and everything else.
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Date: 9/25/2020 12:23:00 PM
Toms are one of my favs an have it with a lot of things but I do tend to grow to many but taste so much better when home grown. Glad you enjoyed, Emilia : )
Date: 9/24/2020 9:08:00 AM
oh your poem made me smile Emilia, my own tomatoes I sowed twice and ended up with three pretty straggly plants... but I have a ferral one in the greenhouse that has taken over on corner and it has about 30 branches it is a triffid!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/24/2020 10:48:00 AM
I have a garden full of the triffids and some are quiet scary looking plus I get tangled in them which makes it worse lol. Glad it made you smile Jan, Emilia xx : )

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