Roy Pett Poet Rhyme

Space For Sale

Space for sale

Let me spell out our position 
Earth is certainly running out of space,
no obligation it’s your decision 
so my friend get ahead of the inevitable race,

we are offering a new world among the stars
a place for the future, luxury in Venetian red
grab this opportunity, new life on wonderful Mars
planet earths resources running out, soon be dead,

we will be with you throughout the process 
for all of yours and your family’s needs 
any worries or concerns we will certainly address
your chance to live on a planet that exceeds,

we can’t emphasise enough how important 
that you consider your family’s future,
unfortunately Earth will soon be dead, dormant 
move to Mars take charge become a ruler.

so we advise you not to delay
for a price that doesn’t cost the Earth
sign on the dotted line today,
it’s what you deserve, it’s what you’re worth.

3/2/2018
Contest:- advertisement: sell something make us want it.
Sponsored by Lewis Rayners.

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Gregory Richard Barden March 23, 2018 at 7:57 PM Love it - witty and charming! Congratulations on your win, Roy - keep up the great work! :-) Roy Pett March 24, 2018 at 8:18 AM Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment, receiving the wonderful comments from amazing poets as you is most encouraging, thanks again Gregory for your support much appreciated. :))

Viv Wigley March 21, 2018 at 2:44 AM Sign me up, Roy. Congrats! Regards , Viv Roy Pett March 21, 2018 at 8:10 AM Thank you for your congratulations Viv much appreciated, sorry Viv all poets on poetry soup are not eligible to take up this offer as they are needed on Earth due to their ability to entertain and inspire through their amazing poetry, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Jan Allison March 20, 2018 at 10:52 AM Really made me smile and the final stanza was superb especially for a price that doesn;t cost the earth!:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Roy Pett March 20, 2018 at 11:09 AM Thanks Jan for your congratulations and very kind comment, really pleased you liked this as I enjoyed writing it, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))

Line Gauthier March 20, 2018 at 8:48 AM Very original poem. Well done and congrats on your win, Roy. Roy Pett March 20, 2018 at 10:57 AM Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Line, you’re support is really appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham March 20, 2018 at 1:01 AM Congratulations Roy, I'd like to book eight seats, tom. Roy Pett March 20, 2018 at 10:55 AM Thank you for your congratulations Tom, you’re support is much appreciated. :))

Eve Roper March 20, 2018 at 12:19 AM Congratulations on this awesome write. Roy Pett March 20, 2018 at 10:51 AM Thank you for your congratulations Eve you’re very kind. :))

Vladislav Raven March 2, 2018 at 8:42 PM Hi Roy, seems like a winner to me, good luck in the contest. I enjoyed the read, the words singing in delightful rhythm. You have created a wonderful concept. This one goes into my faves. Have a wonderful weekend. Your Friend....Mike. Roy Pett March 3, 2018 at 3:16 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes my friend, to get comments such as this from accomplished poets like you Mike is really encouraging, thanks again for putting this into your faves really appreciated.:))

Probir Gupta March 2, 2018 at 6:41 AM wonderful ... a winning entry ... Roy Pett March 2, 2018 at 11:13 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment Probir, if you think this is a winner that’s good enough for me, thanks again for your support. :))

Vijay Pandit March 2, 2018 at 5:47 AM Awesome Roy..simply imaginative and creative! A wining poem in my mind. Roy Pett March 2, 2018 at 5:55 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment Vijay, not sure if this is what Lewis is looking for but if you enjoyed reading this thats good enough for me, thanks again for your support. :))