Space

Fill the void Fill it, as it lingers Through the cracks Of your soul Fill it before your company Becomes your regrets Fill it with stars Fill it with galaxies But don’t let the darkness Of the space, crawl in Or you will feel You will see, nothingness In its true form

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Skat A

Date: 5/10/2015 10:24:00 AM

Hello Adel :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love

Adel Fakhry
Date: 5/17/2015 5:59:00 PM

WOW, this just made my day, thanks a lot for letting me know! :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/4/2015 3:32:00 PM

Adel, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Adel Fakhry
Date: 5/17/2015 6:01:00 PM

Dear, Thanks a lot for welcoming me, and I am sure I will have fun around here. I have already found many friendly poets, just like yourself. Thanks a lot again, Adel.

Darlene Gifford

Date: 5/2/2015 7:10:00 AM

Welcome to poetry soup, Adel! As far as space goes, I fill mine with God and His love. Yes, we should not let the darkness crawl in. God shines His light in our dark places and chases away evil. If you like stars and looking at our beautiful sky, have you checked out the Hubble Telescope online. There are over 100 fantastic images of space. Blessings, Darlene

Adel Fakhry
Date: 5/4/2015 11:40:00 AM

Darlene, First of all, thanks for welcoming me here. Secondly, yes, and darkness will never be absolute as long as there is a glimmer of light which, nevertheless, could be god lending us/you a hand. I love space and stars, thanks for the recommendation. Bless you too, Adel

Skat A

Date: 5/1/2015 11:17:00 PM

WOW, I don't like the feeling of nothingness. I enjoyed this poem very much. Adel, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Adel Fakhry
Date: 5/4/2015 11:37:00 AM

Skat, Yes, the feeling at some point in our lives could be of immense destructive force. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, and for you enthusiasm to read more from me. :) I love poets, and I love interacting with them. I will drop by of course, and thanks for welcoming me :) hugs*