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Souvenirs From Playground

Message of the wind Tucked in little girl's pocket Ready for Life's Fall www.scripca.com

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/24/2010 1:58:00 PM

Nice! You really got a complete an lovely thought from this. This is really a sweet piece. Congratulations on getting a win!

James Fraser

Date: 9/19/2010 2:47:00 PM

Terrific Haiku Iolanda, it's a little GEM >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 3:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Iolanda in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

De R

Date: 9/7/2010 2:49:00 AM

soup mail:)

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:40:00 PM

lovely, congrats on your win

Constance La France

Date: 9/6/2010 3:32:00 PM

Thanks for commenting on my poetry. This is a truly wonderful haiku, I was such a little girl, always gathering things in my pocket, at night on my dresser, leafs and twigs, even rocks, my Mom didn't know what to do with it. so we had a special box... we would press the leaves in wax paper with an iron, do you remember doing that~~ love constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 11:14:00 AM

A very interesting one, Iolande, quite unique. Congratulations to you. thanks for your blog comment too. I recall your hubbie has my birthdate!! LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/6/2010 4:27:00 AM

Iolanda, congrats on your win in Rick's Contest.. Hope you are enjoying your long weekend, love Wilma

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/5/2010 10:17:00 PM

A lovely haiku/senryu Iolanda. Congratulations your win in this contest. I loved message of the wind. Aloha, Connie

John Beam

Date: 9/5/2010 9:17:00 PM

thank you and congrats to you enjoyed reading

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/5/2010 7:54:00 PM

Dear Iolanda, Congratulations on your 15th Place Win in Rick's "Leaf In The Wind" Contest! Thanks for commenting on mine. Love, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on the 15th place winin the contest, Iolanda

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/5/2010 5:52:00 PM

Congrats, Iolanda. Nice going. Ralph

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/4/2010 10:49:00 AM

Iolanda, I've send you soupmail :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/4/2010 12:26:00 AM

Great haiku Iolanda, had me smiling, love the innocense, love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2010 4:54:00 PM

Really enjoyed reading this one..I can see the scene..Keep the gifted pen flowing for us to enjoy here at soup..Sara

De R

Date: 9/3/2010 2:35:00 AM

This is unique and beautiful, Iolanda! Best wishe in the contest:) Emilia

John Rhinem

Date: 9/2/2010 11:57:00 PM

Smile ~ Sounds soo serenely peaceful & even enchanting; these colours of hopes & dreams; gently spoken pastels, brushed tenderly & lovingly by, a silk touches softened hand; "Beautiful Lolonda" ~ "My Love & Warmth Always to You & Your Loves," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Tomorrow, 'Amid The Colours of Love;'" Bye!:) ~

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/2/2010 10:03:00 PM

beautiful Haiku enjoyed this , Harry

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/2/2010 7:50:00 PM

tucked in her pockets? did she get mugged?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/1/2010 5:39:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry Iolanda. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2010 5:21:00 AM

Nice observation and equally well expressed with images, Iolanda