Souvenirs From Playground

Message of the wind
Tucked in little girl's pocket
Ready for Life's Fall

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Augustus Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 1:58 PM
Nice! You really got a complete an lovely thought from this. This is really a sweet piece. Congratulations on getting a win!
Fraser Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Terrific Haiku Iolanda, it's a little GEM >> James
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations on your win Iolanda in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol
R Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 2:49 AM
soup mail:)
Roberts Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:40 PM
lovely, congrats on your win
La France Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Thanks for commenting on my poetry. This is a truly wonderful haiku, I was such a little girl, always gathering things in my pocket, at night on my dresser, leafs and twigs, even rocks, my Mom didn't know what to do with it. so we had a special box... we would press the leaves in wax paper with an iron, do you remember doing that~~ love constance
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 11:14 AM
A very interesting one, Iolande, quite unique. Congratulations to you. thanks for your blog comment too. I recall your hubbie has my birthdate!! LUv, Andrea
Neels Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:27 AM
Iolanda, congrats on your win in Rick's Contest.. Hope you are enjoying your long weekend, love Wilma
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 10:17 PM
A lovely haiku/senryu Iolanda. Congratulations your win in this contest. I loved message of the wind. Aloha, Connie
Beam Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 9:17 PM
thank you and congrats to you enjoyed reading
Haick Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 7:54 PM
Dear Iolanda, Congratulations on your 15th Place Win in Rick's "Leaf In The Wind" Contest! Thanks for commenting on mine. Love, Audrey
Mehta Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Congratulations on the 15th place winin the contest, Iolanda
Taylor Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 5:52 PM
Congrats, Iolanda. Nice going. Ralph
Neels Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Iolanda, I've send you soupmail :)
Neels Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 12:26 AM
Great haiku Iolanda, had me smiling, love the innocense, love Wilma
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 4:54 PM
Really enjoyed reading this one..I can see the scene..Keep the gifted pen flowing for us to enjoy here at soup..Sara
R Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 2:35 AM
This is unique and beautiful, Iolanda! Best wishe in the contest:) Emilia
Rhinem Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 11:57 PM
Smile ~ Sounds soo serenely peaceful & even enchanting; these colours of hopes & dreams; gently spoken pastels, brushed tenderly & lovingly by, a silk touches softened hand; "Beautiful Lolonda" ~ "My Love & Warmth Always to You & Your Loves," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Tomorrow, 'Amid The Colours of Love;'" Bye!:) ~
Horsman Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 10:03 PM
beautiful Haiku enjoyed this , Harry
Loving Iii Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 7:50 PM
tucked in her pockets? did she get mugged?
Brown Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:39 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Iolanda. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:21 AM
Nice observation and equally well expressed with images, Iolanda
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