Southward Skies

As sunburned skies kiss August goodbye, on molten wings southwards they fly... 09/09/20

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Date: 8/8/2021 9:39:00 AM

Can't August be a devil but so far ours has been more tolerable than usual. I enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats. Sara

Date: 8/7/2021 11:30:00 AM

stunningly beautiful. one of my favorites on this list!!

Date: 8/7/2021 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this great oneliner, Michelle.

Date: 8/7/2021 7:01:00 AM

Beautiful Monoku. Congratulations on your win!

Date: 9/12/2020 9:20:00 PM

Delightful monoku, Michelle, with some really nice assonance. I love 'sunburned skies'. We had some of those just last week! Peace, John

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/13/2020 9:56:00 PM

Yes, we've had those here too, as you've probably seen on the news!

Date: 9/9/2020 6:44:00 PM

This year, I'm glad to see them go... Not as big a fan of the heat as I used to be! ~ Cool Cucumber

Date: 9/9/2020 3:14:00 PM

I can see the birds migrating now, Michelle. A lovely monoku featuring a scene many of us have enjoyed! Hugs, Carolyn

Date: 9/9/2020 11:17:00 AM

May they take COVID-19 with them! Aloha! Rico

Date: 9/9/2020 10:52:00 AM

Nice imagery here...and colorful flight