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Michelle Faulkner

Southward Skies

As sunburned skies kiss August goodbye, on molten wings southwards they fly...

09/09/20

Copyright © Michelle Faulkner | Year Posted 2020

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August 8, 2021 at 9:39 AM

Can't August be a devil but so far ours has been more tolerable than usual. I enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2021 at 11:30 AM

stunningly beautiful. one of my favorites on this list!!

August 7, 2021 at 9:50 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this great oneliner, Michelle.

Christuraj Alex

August 7, 2021 at 7:01 AM

Beautiful Monoku. Congratulations on your win!

September 12, 2020 at 9:20 PM

Delightful monoku, Michelle, with some really nice assonance. I love 'sunburned skies'. We had some of those just last week! Peace, John

Michelle Faulkner

September 13, 2020 at 9:56 PM

Yes, we've had those here too, as you've probably seen on the news!

September 9, 2020 at 6:44 PM

This year, I'm glad to see them go... Not as big a fan of the heat as I used to be! ~ Cool Cucumber

Carolyn Devonshire

September 9, 2020 at 3:14 PM

I can see the birds migrating now, Michelle. A lovely monoku featuring a scene many of us have enjoyed! Hugs, Carolyn

September 9, 2020 at 11:17 AM

May they take COVID-19 with them! Aloha! Rico

September 9, 2020 at 10:52 AM

Nice imagery here...and colorful flight

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