Southern Plantations

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Magnificent great homes Fill'd of much history and beauty Majestic jewels Fill with many memories Some so good some so bad Sun is going down Ancient walls show amidt oak trees Many stand so tall Surviving time many wars Elegant homes exuding such grace Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2014 November,14,2014

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Michael Newman

Date: 11/20/2014 11:35:00 AM

Well thought out poem.Evocative of another age. Miken

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/19/2014 8:15:00 AM

Dorian, Most elegant words in your Tanka here for most magnificent homes. These types of homes I remember seeing many times when traveling much in the USA -- and particularly in the South. Well-Done my dear!! Best Always, Gary

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/16/2014 8:56:00 AM

Dear Dorian! As you say, these elegant homes are filled with many memories of a time long ago! A beautiful tribute dear friend! Hugs XXX

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/17/2014 2:43:00 AM

Thank you Jack for all, you're the sweetest of friends! :) xxxx D.