Southern Breezes

Wind whistled through the towering pines
Blasts of arctic winter tendrils slowly dying,
While warm southern breezes wait patiently
Until early spring beckons them northward.

FIRST PLACE WINNER
"A Strand Poetry Contest"
Poetry Soup, January 13, 2022
written January 2, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Bowden Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 7:57 PM
I love the change of seasons. Congrats to you. Excellent job.
Hankins Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 8:15 PM
Thank you, Craig. Nice to hear from you.
Calasibetta Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:51 PM
Stunning imagery Milton~Congratulations on your win! :)Paulette
Hankins Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 2:19 PM
Thanks so much, Paulette. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 8:28 AM
You have captured the seasons in a wonderful way my friend!
Hankins Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 8:40 AM
Thanks, Caren. I appreciate your responses to my poems.
Sambourne Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 6:30 AM
And so we wait for the return of soothing breezes. Very nicely penned, Milton. I enjoyed your posting. All the best, Brian
Hankins Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 9:08 AM
Thank you, Brian. I really appreciate your comments on my poems. All the best to you, too!
Cunningham Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 12:54 AM
Your travels through the countryside have inspired you well Milton. Tom
Hankins Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:51 AM
Thank you so much, Tom. It was a good trip.
Boles Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 8:01 PM
An unassuming and dignified appreciation of nature. Great Milt!...ab
Hankins Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Anselmo, thanks so much for your thoughtful comment on my poem.
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