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*Image of Sense And Self Love by Pixabay sources alive and active stimulates reach for the stars incentivizes a changing world in motion striving individuals eyes and ears astir soul afresh sense and reason heart beseech the mind we progress in baby steps and success with the right steps 2021 June 04 *1st Place* ALL YOURS (Jun 11) ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 June 11

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 6/12/2021 11:40:00 AM

Beautiful! Congratulations William, this is an amazing poem!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/12/2021 11:47:00 AM

Thanks, BJ, this is most kind of you, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/12/2021 8:59:00 AM

William, congratulations on your first place win. This poem literally jumps off the page with life and movement! No inertia here even in "baby steps." It is exuberant with life! Blessings my friend and Aloha!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/12/2021 10:26:00 AM

Admirably refreshing, Sam, your astute savviness grasp upon the gist as always my friend, you have my thanks, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/11/2021 10:32:00 AM

'we progress in baby steps and success with the right steps' Beautiful. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/11/2021 10:42:00 AM

I am truly grateful, Christuraj, blessings to you my friend, Aloha!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/5/2021 5:28:00 AM

Wise words and so true, William. I hope you have a lovely weekend

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/5/2021 9:35:00 AM

Thanks, Lasaad, I appreciate you my friend, Aloha!