William Kelii Kekaula Poet Tanka

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alive and active
stimulates reach for the stars
incentivizes
a changing world in motion
striving individuals

eyes and ears astir
soul afresh sense and reason
heart beseech the mind
we progress in baby steps
and success with the right steps

2021 June 04
*1st Place*
ALL YOURS (Jun 11)
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 June 11

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Bj Legros Kelley June 12, 2021 at 11:40 AM Beautiful! Congratulations William, this is an amazing poem! William Kelii Kekaula June 12, 2021 at 11:47 AM Thanks, BJ, this is most kind of you, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman June 12, 2021 at 8:59 AM William, congratulations on your first place win. This poem literally jumps off the page with life and movement! No inertia here even in "baby steps." It is exuberant with life! Blessings my friend and Aloha! William Kelii Kekaula June 12, 2021 at 10:26 AM Admirably refreshing, Sam, your astute savviness grasp upon the gist as always my friend, you have my thanks, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex June 11, 2021 at 10:32 AM 'we progress in baby steps and success with the right steps' Beautiful. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula June 11, 2021 at 10:42 AM I am truly grateful, Christuraj, blessings to you my friend, Aloha!

Sotto Poet June 5, 2021 at 5:28 AM Wise words and so true, William. I hope you have a lovely weekend William Kelii Kekaula June 5, 2021 at 9:35 AM Thanks, Lasaad, I appreciate you my friend, Aloha!