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Parousia - the second coming of Christ

Source Paradise

Eden source paradise of Hawaiian islands not their idols, yet their beauty Heaven better parousia judgment comes; and too, grace purification of the earth restored bye, sin goodbye to death hello to our Savior Creator of magnificence and rest
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Hind Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 7:56 PM
Oh, you won a contest!? Great! I liked the flow of this one.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 3:48 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative three Cinquain writes. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................
Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 12:15 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Eslinger Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:46 AM
Hi Kim, wow! A perfect poem for me. Reflective. Comcise. Imagist, involving senses and translated then with skill and use of great love of language into poetry to serve God and inspire everyone….Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:57 PM
I appreciate you, Sally! Thank you!
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 5:16 AM
Dear Kim, your poem is such a powerful blend of reverence and hope. I love how the imagery flows so beautifully, from earthly paradise to divine restoration. “Bye, sin… hello to our Savior” is especially moving—so simple, yet amazing. Truly uplifting! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:58 PM
Winter blessings to you to, with red cardinals and pretty berries :) Thank you, dear Daniel!
Singh Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 7:58 PM
Natural paradise imagery with Christian concepts of salvation.,judgement and and renewal.Indeed we need to make the earth like a paradise.An inspiring poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:54 PM
Thank you, Akham!
Tor Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 3:22 PM
Kim such a lovely message of the Rapture and Jesus return to fix and correct what Satan has destroyed. God bless you for sharing.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:53 PM
Thank you, my friend!
DiMino Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 2:12 PM
Absolutely -- paradise awaits our ascension. Very inspirational.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:53 PM
Thank you, dear one!
Wright Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Kim for blessing my heart with your wonderful poem. God Bless you. Tom Wright
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:53 PM
Tom, I appreciate you commenting on this one! Hugs <3
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 1:08 PM
- Beautiful written, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:52 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
George Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 8:26 AM
Your poetry is resonant with spiritual undertones. As a staunch Christian, I love it. With death, we don't die, but enter eternal life, with God our Heavenly Father. Beautiful cinquains, dear Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:52 PM
Thank you, my sister-in-Christ!
mysore Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 6:07 AM
awesome theme, lovely write dear poet. well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:51 PM
Thank you, Thriveni!
Rolland Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 5:39 AM
so beautiful, when we purify the earth, we purify our souls, thanks poet for the gracious and original poetry blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:50 PM
Thank you, Yann!
Daniel Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 5:30 AM
This is beautiful, Kim, lovely and spiritual at the same time:)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 7:50 PM
Thank you, Joanna! :)
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