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Parousia - the second coming of Christ

Eden source paradise of Hawaiian islands not their idols, yet their beauty Heaven better parousia judgment comes; and too, grace purification of the earth restored bye, sin goodbye to death hello to our Savior Creator of magnificence and rest

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Paige Hind

Date: 2/6/2025 7:56:00 PM

Oh, you won a contest!? Great! I liked the flow of this one.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2025 3:48:00 AM

Thank you, Paige!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/6/2025 11:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative three Cinquain writes. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2025 12:15:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/4/2025 7:46:00 AM

Hi Kim, wow! A perfect poem for me. Reflective. Comcise. Imagist, involving senses and translated then with skill and use of great love of language into poetry to serve God and inspire everyone….Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2025 7:57:00 PM

I appreciate you, Sally! Thank you!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/3/2025 5:16:00 AM

Dear Kim, your poem is such a powerful blend of reverence and hope. I love how the imagery flows so beautifully, from earthly paradise to divine restoration. “Bye, sin… hello to our Savior” is especially moving—so simple, yet amazing. Truly uplifting! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2025 7:58:00 PM

Winter blessings to you to, with red cardinals and pretty berries :) Thank you, dear Daniel!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 2/2/2025 7:58:00 PM

Natural paradise imagery with Christian concepts of salvation.,judgement and and renewal.Indeed we need to make the earth like a paradise.An inspiring poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2025 7:54:00 PM

Thank you, Akham!

Michael Tor

Date: 2/2/2025 3:22:00 PM

Kim such a lovely message of the Rapture and Jesus return to fix and correct what Satan has destroyed. God bless you for sharing.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2025 7:53:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/2/2025 2:12:00 PM

Absolutely -- paradise awaits our ascension. Very inspirational.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2025 7:53:00 PM

Thank you, dear one!

Tom Wright

Date: 2/2/2025 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Kim for blessing my heart with your wonderful poem. God Bless you. Tom Wright

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2025 7:53:00 PM

Tom, I appreciate you commenting on this one! Hugs <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/2/2025 1:08:00 PM

- Beautiful written, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2025 7:52:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Valsa George

Date: 2/2/2025 8:26:00 AM

Your poetry is resonant with spiritual undertones. As a staunch Christian, I love it. With death, we don't die, but enter eternal life, with God our Heavenly Father. Beautiful cinquains, dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2025 7:52:00 PM

Thank you, my sister-in-Christ!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 2/2/2025 6:07:00 AM

awesome theme, lovely write dear poet. well done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2025 7:51:00 PM

Thank you, Thriveni!

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/2/2025 5:39:00 AM

so beautiful, when we purify the earth, we purify our souls, thanks poet for the gracious and original poetry blessings

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2025 7:50:00 PM

Thank you, Yann!