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Sour Grapes

The teen’s face beamed with pride in his new car,
But Bestie exploded in jealous rage.
His reluctant congrats, a lame sidebar;
“I’d simply rather walk”— framed his outrage.

On Friday she failed the entrance exam,
Going to college, now holds no desire,
Higher education—a real flimflam,
she declared, all she’d felt now a fool’s pyre.

Excuses shirk blame—we can all decry,
Winning is fun, but losing kills yearning;
Life isn’t perfect—things do go awry,
But disparagement isn't good learning!

Be strong and just—suck it up when you lose.
Raisins are just sour grapes—with a bruise.


August 19, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Good one, Michael. Congrats on your win.
Wegman Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Thanks Line!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:40 PM
The truth in this piece speaks loud and clear. No one likes a sore loser! Congrats on your wonderful win Michael!
Wegman Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 5:18 AM
Many thanks Connie!
Haight Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Much wisdom in your 'sour grapes' Sonnet, Michael! I enjoyed your poem and congratulations on your placement on such a short list of winners! Sandra :)
Wegman Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 5:18 AM
Thank you Sandra!
Canerdy Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 10:17 PM
CONGRATS on your win, Michael! That last line WOW! Janice
Wegman Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 9:54 AM
I appreciate your comments, Janice!
Walker Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 9:03 AM
Excellent, I love it.
Wegman Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Thanks Debbie. Fun stuff...
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