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Sour Ambitions of a Puny Mind

Contrived to be relevant
An extreme subversive 
of distorted concoctions
While having his stricken soul bare
And denigrated to a faceless crone
For his vicissitudes are an improbable casualty
Of a broken soul....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/25/2016 10:12:00 AM
There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.
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Nthabiseng Moraba
Date: 2/25/2016 11:08:00 AM
Merci beaucoup pour les paroles aimables. I am truly inspired. Merci......
Date: 7/28/2015 11:48:00 PM
true insanity is the byproduct of vanity that is mistaken so dandily and you handled it so candidly....very nice....;)
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Nthabiseng Moraba
Date: 7/29/2015 2:23:00 AM
Well Thank You. Yes Vanity sometimes can make one embark on plausible platitudes that may lead to utter Fatuity & Insanity....

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