Sour Ambitions of a Puny Mind

Contrived to be relevant
An extreme subversive 
of distorted concoctions
While having his stricken soul bare
And denigrated to a faceless crone
For his vicissitudes are an improbable casualty
Of a broken soul....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 10:12 AM
There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.
Moraba Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Merci beaucoup pour les paroles aimables. I am truly inspired. Merci......
Boddie Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 11:48 PM
true insanity is the byproduct of vanity that is mistaken so dandily and you handled it so candidly....very nice....;)
Moraba Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 2:23 AM
Well Thank You. Yes Vanity sometimes can make one embark on plausible platitudes that may lead to utter Fatuity & Insanity....
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