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Soup's the Place

This Valentine’s clandestine
And hidden‘s every tryst
Encoded rhyme, each one sublime
he's sure to get the gist

Love letter’s fly, the bold and sly
In every line’s a kiss
Don’t wonder why, no need to cry
You’ll get your share of bliss

The Soup’s the place, you'll find the grace
Love thirsty all are we
So let love go, let your Love know
We’ll act like we don’t see! ;)

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vaso Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Loved this sweet rhyme! Hugs, and your poetry is beautiful and timeless! so there!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Back for anther sip!
Manassian Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Thanks for taking another sip, Richard. My poetry seems to be going nowhere fast. I don't understand it. I thought I was getting BETTER, but my older writes have more views than my newer writes??? Less friends? Hugs
Sage Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 11:28 AM
lol, we need not act like we don't see, because we are intentionally being shown, this is good for shy ones though...let your pen forever run gold and gems
Trifiatis Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Witty and sweet, appropriate for the occasion! Enjoyed, dear Eileen!
Callus Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Charming and delightfully sweet, Eileen! Love your ending:) Great to see you back in action. hugs // paul
Hicks Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Great Valentine's Day poem. But my favorite is your ending line ... it's like "get a room" told in reverse! (now that's a first ;) ... And yes, it's good to be back!
Chircop Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Very sweet poem Eileen. In life I did many pretend I did not see especially at work..At times I did not hear works too..: )Love your messagr here.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 6:21 AM
Delightful and sweet Eileen. Hugs Rick
Andresen Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 3:08 AM
- Love Sweet Love :) - A great poem, dear Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Konos Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 12:41 AM
CC....Clever and Charming....
Turner Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Love is in the air. Great write, Eileen. Maybe a mystery man?
Devnath  Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 4:32 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 3:36 PM
haha, "we'll act like we don't see." that is cute as can BE. I sure enjoyed this one, Eileen.
Nance Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 3:28 PM
:) cupid is everywhere <3
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