"soup's Greatest"

(Internal rhymes and also end rhymes)

P.oetry at it’s best, always meets God's test, 
O.ften times is best , as minds remain at rest,
E.ntries fair and galore, poems of heart’s explore,
T.riumphing mind‘s gore, as hearts begin to score,
R.eversing strife’s trends, poetry honors friends,
Y.es here poetry is penned, inspired as heart lends,  

S.top in and shop around, a good friend can be found,
O.pen your heart’s gown,  and good friends will abound,
U.nadulterated troops, are not reincarnated snoops,
P.oetry Soup‘s love troops, never dupe one's great scoops !! 

Poetry Picture of Poetry Soup
In Honor of: Adeleke Adeite
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Many congrats John on your fine win in Adeleke's contest >> James
Brown Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 11:14 AM
Congratulations on your win John in Adeleke's contest. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 10:39 AM
John many congratulations on your win in the contest ;) bb Wilma
Mannan Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Many congratulations dear Moses for this super win. God Bless.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Congrats Moses on your big win in Adeleke's contest with this awesome Acrostic poem.. enjoy another sweet victory my friend with luv..
Mehta Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 5:22 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, john
Keogh Jr. Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 6:51 PM
Nice summation and I think that you have caught much of what makes the Soup special for all of us. Really good light whimsy. Regards and thank you from Gerard.
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October 20, 2010 at 11:44 AM
How beautiful and true your expressions are in this sweet Poem. Expressions without the hearts feelings can never be from a good Poet and you have sketched this beauty in this lovely Acrostic. My good wishes for your contest. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra.... John Freeman.
Locksley Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 11:30 AM
It's wonderful to have a please wheree we can share our poetry with "love troops." I really like this upbeat view of Poetry Soup.
Devonshire Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 6:01 PM
Your poem extends a warm hand and an open heart to all Soup newcomers, John. It is the poetry that is inspired by the heart that brings honor to the site. Wishing you the best in Adeleke's contest, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 10:22 AM
I just love the rhyme used in your Acrostic for Adeleke's contest John. Good luck for the contest ;) Wilma
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 11:18 AM
Magnificent John. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Very nie picture you have drawn, John, of the joyful activities on the soup, Good luck, my friend
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October 12, 2010 at 7:39 PM
Scoops? I like it! you are talented my soup friend!
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