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Souper Nova

Now listen, you called me a Souper nova missing the pun, being clever with words ain’t for everyone, you comment mindless and tough I laugh cus you're a spineless pup do you ever think.. umm.. no you don’t think, too dumb, see what I did, stupid one, those comments don’t push me, comically witless and left too witness, you can keep saying "no talent wussy" says a lot about you, sour sad, but mostly shows the world your simple thickness. Your bark sparkles rainbows and glitter, your crummy insults say you're a bit bitter, mentally unfit you should go back to Twitter. Littering poems as though you’ve no faults, reputation grows with those blocking your thoughts, writing profanity and then deleting, a second personality must be peeking, bipolar and you're a bypass everyone avoids your nasty basking, alas no one wants to know ya attacking people for extra exposure, wishing the newspaper send a limo and chauffeur when people read you they notice the odour, attitude stinks, a man hooked on alcoholic drinks, acts before he thinks, sinks then starts with the drinks. Now I said you're stupid, and you used cosmology, if you weren't so stupid you'd have sent an apology, we're here because you comment horribly child chat doesn't bother me, others want you dealt with properly. You’ve a reputation for dissing no one would miss you if you went missing yeah you’ve a talent, see I can give credit but You’re minds imbalanced and your character’s septic, Disease ridden yet assured it’s perfected It overshadows your rhythm and wrecks it See you think you’re the best with ignorant arrogance Champions like that are ignored, not a glance, if it's recognition you want, no flipping chance. Just a narcissist likely to go to far and spar with fists, fights in bars getting hit and slit, sees you with scars from male hissy fits, getting barred lacking wit and charm, a one man barmy, thinks he’s an army, the delusion’s alarming, can't harm me. you need to control the troll your supernova's a generic rhyme could of wrote that poem anytime, calling me a superstar when you’re full of yourself, the only thing clear is you’ve poor mental health, An alias brain being lame in vain out to upset, wailing criticism like rain runs drains just a muppet, in reality I’m not going at your poetry but your vile personality purposely attacking me, just pathetically, getting published your only accomplishment? It’s gone to your head cus you're one dumb hunt

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Date: 6/6/2019 1:34:00 PM
ha ha ha you certainly shoot from the hip Nick. I did a poem about 'pompous poets' and it turned into a collaboration it may make you smile www.poetrysoup.com/poem/pompous_poet_-_now_a_collaboration_1099239:-) keep on penning and don't be deterred by negativity I've had flack for writing poop poems - tough I am here to stay:-) hugs Jan xx
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Nick Trim
Date: 6/10/2019 2:11:00 PM
funny how some poems are ok lol
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Nick Trim
Date: 6/6/2019 2:20:00 PM
it's the UEFA League Semi Final, only the 3rd semi final i've seen England play in, they lost the last 2, third times a charm, we just scored !! 1-0 come on
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/6/2019 1:46:00 PM
Football lol I'm listening to the TT races with 'real' men lol - who would have thought an 'electric bike' would ever lap the TT circuit but the technology now is amazing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Nick Trim
Date: 6/6/2019 1:40:00 PM
lol thanks jan, football is starting i'll have a read after :)
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Nick Trim
Date: 6/6/2019 1:40:00 PM
lol thanks jan, football is starting i'll have a read after :)

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