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Soup Spoonin'

Online tonite
looks like 
a whole lotta' spoonin'
goin' on in the "Soup"

nosin' around the comment coral
I see love 
amongst the group

yessir'...
hot Soup!
stirred 
not shaken
marriage scent in the air
no fakin'

where it leads...
we shall see
I know some 
are dippin' crackers in the "Soup"
but Lawd' knows 
IT AIN'T ME!~

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Anne Rutherford

March 14, 2012 at 8:36 AM

Love your humor, this is priceless for all of us on soup !!Have a look at my 'Jack', not as funny as yours but you might get a chuckle . Anne

Poet Destroyer A

February 5, 2012 at 5:29 PM

that's funny.. I'm spooning myself with a soup delight..lol... swirling and twirling with my Nathan.D..... yuppers.. met him on the soup.. now im eating crackers... and leaving the cookies behind..lol..pd

Charmaine Chircop

February 5, 2012 at 12:33 PM

fun poem..a pleasure to read :) Charma

Dan Kearley

February 3, 2012 at 10:33 PM

Taint me niether...But I like to keep my words slyyy...And that ain't no lie

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2012 at 5:47 PM

hahaha. another GOOD one. REally fun stuff you are putting up tonight. And I loved your Andee Land story. Yes, what a store it would be!!!

Joe Maverick

January 30, 2012 at 4:25 PM

Hello J s l, i have enjoyed the read and the intrigue....still everything's subject to change.

Kim Merryman

January 30, 2012 at 12:28 PM

Enjoyed your witty write. Love, Kim

Carolyn Devonshire

January 30, 2012 at 11:06 AM

LOL This is so cute, Joey. Yes, I guess there are some "crackers" in the Soup, but you are definitely not among them. This would have been a great entry for Carol Brown's recent contest to write a poem about Poetry Soup. My health hasn't been good, Joey. When we are facing life-altering conditions, sometimes we think more deeply. Perhaps that is what you saw in my poetry. Also enjoying free verse more. Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 30, 2012 at 1:17 AM

Hi there Joey! This is a cute write, yeah, I think there's a bunch of people who find their Soup spicy and sweet over here ;p...nice play on spooning soup here :D