Soup Mail Surprise
When i went to my Soup mail
I was in for a lovely surprise
It was a grown up called Forest?
His comments i think are cries
I don't understand his logic
It appears confused to me
Am i relaying to an Adult
Or a youngster, say aged three
I don't want to be so judgmental
Also not to despise
But to read comments by an adult
He should act his age, not his shoe size
Subject heading in his Soup mail
So long you'll have to zoom
REad my poem James Fraser Death in the Mens Bathroom!
Oh i forgot about his message
It read: bro....you need discipline
This 6' 2" Scottish Highlander
Not exactly jumping out of his skin.
" The clever use of changing the RE to REad threw it for me - pure class "
Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2009
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