James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Soup Mail Surprise

When i went to my Soup mail
I was in for a lovely surprise
It was a grown up called Forest?
His comments i think are cries
 
I don't understand his logic
It appears confused to me
Am i relaying to an Adult
Or a youngster, say aged three
 
I don't want to be so judgmental
Also not to despise
But to read comments by an adult
He should act his age, not his shoe size
 
Subject heading in his Soup mail
So long you'll have to zoom
REad my poem James Fraser Death in the Mens Bathroom!
Oh i forgot about his message
It read: bro....you need discipline
This 6' 2" Scottish Highlander
Not exactly jumping out of his skin.
 
 
" The clever use of changing the RE to REad threw it for me - pure class "

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Janice Herzog May 20, 2009 at 9:52 AM Dear James: I have yet to hear from this idiot, but I wanted you to know that I don't like how he's been attacking you, and many of my other friends here. Hope he gets banned from the site. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

Carolyn Devonshire May 13, 2009 at 1:53 PM You have mail

Michael Jordan May 11, 2009 at 5:35 AM Yea I got one that said, I'm pure f ing evil or something like that - Figured that out all on his own - God Bless, mj

Kristin Reynolds May 11, 2009 at 2:53 AM Oh man, I echo Carolyn; a 6'2 braveheart Highlander? I am positivly swooning. excellent poem, filled with class. :) loved it, keep fighting for freedom, and I'll keep cheering you on. much love, Kristin P.S-now I'm probably always going to picture you as Mel Gibson in a kilt. that's a good thing. lol

Carolyn Devonshire May 10, 2009 at 7:31 PM A 6'2" Braveheart from the Highlands! I wouldn't expect anyone to mess around with you, James. So sorry our site has been tarnished by all of this negative energy. You know I love you and your work. You have brought so much talent to Poetry Soup in just a few weeks. You truly are a master poet, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Derrick Burton May 10, 2009 at 3:32 PM maybe he is going through some things or need some love on the comments or something. we are only human. Loved this piece though, very honest.

Raul Moreno May 10, 2009 at 3:21 PM I think his hate list grows everyday. He just wants up to waste our time slammin' him instead of creating beautiful poetry....Raul

Charmaine Chircop May 10, 2009 at 2:51 PM i think we are all offensive at the moment by one of our poetry soupers friend- i still love forest,i just feel sorry he cant seem to see that all we want is some respect,as we respect him,maybe one day he realize his words cut deep and be the old friend i used to admire so much, for wqriting good poetry,but i dont hate him ,i just dislike his deed,hope he reads this too and may God bless us all--charma