Soup Mail

aka “Tall Poppy Syndrome”

In there your shadow
that is challenged to please you,
ghostly promises
from one whom forsaken life
and will not rest till you do.

© Harry J Horsman 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Manassian Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 8:31 AM
I am absolutely clueless to what this means. I wish I knew what this write was all about. Your work is always so tender and sweet. I don't get it. Wish like some of the others I'd get a soup mail of explanation. Hope you're doing well!
Komala Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 8:35 AM
very amazing write dear Harry..i am stoping to read some of your brilliant works..awesome.. and would like to say my thank you for every supports appreciate is so very much <3 <3 <3 luv and hugs!!! Sk
May Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 6:01 AM
an interesting write, with an intriguing title....however after further research my curiousity has been satisfied...thanks for sharing ....
Devnath  Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 4:34 PM
Really wonderful truth. Loved always, bl
Lamoureux Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 3:37 PM
You will have to send me a soup mail to help me understand this one. You have peeked my intrest!
Horne Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 7:45 AM
intrigueing piece, Harry
Williams Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Harry the chasers don't give up...David
Gasun Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 5:04 AM
An awesome verse my dear friend, Harry! I love it and I enjoyed reading it! Thank you so much for sharing! love/hugs, Leonora
Breidenthal Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 6:07 PM
Interesting, contemplative work. It's crazy--all the deceptions and lies---when will we ever rest from it? So how will it end? Keep up the amazing work. Always, Laura
Jones Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 5:07 PM
Another winner.....interesting.....
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 4:54 PM
Harry, from reading comments below, I can guess the meaning of this one. Very mysterious for me. I'd sure enjoy getting a soupmail from you to explain what inspired this one. Luv, Andrea
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 1:16 PM
Hi harry like the new avatar, nice to see you close up... not sure of the interpretation but I would go with Chris on this one xx
Thieleke Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 1:07 PM
WOW! I don't know how to feel. it's a lil haunting and beautiful at the same time. that makes it perfect poetry. hello there nice to meet you.
Kendrick Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 9:18 AM
Interesting lines that you have written..Enjoyed reading ..Don't have a clue to the interpertation though..Sara
Horsman Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 9:34 AM
it's all to do with mind control and manipulation Sara...
Ashrafi Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 8:02 AM
I like the words ghostly and shadow..gives a mystical touch to the poem..nice
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