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Soup Creek Toasts
Marmite cocktails are delicious I've heard
They are the hippest cocktails being served
So to raise a toast 
Tell Jenna the host
Mayor Tom's sure to be shaken and stirred.

6th September 2022

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/24/2022 6:32:00 PM

Dang! All these marmite poems have me curious about it, but no kosher marmite is currently available on the market... Perhaps that's a good thing. I don't know... Smiles, gw

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/24/2022 7:14:00 PM

It could be a good thing not to have kosher marmite available, who knows, I’ve never tried marmite so can’t say whether it’s nice or not. Thank you, Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/12/2022 7:57:00 AM

Marmite cocktails, wish they would have give us those when i was a boarder at the Convent and we complained that we had flu - instead we got a cup of hot Bovril and two pieces of lavishly buttered toast, and made to stay in bed until the doctor came to see us. Always in for a cocktail though. Well penned my friend glad Tom enjoyed your poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/12/2022 3:51:00 PM

Hi Jennifer, I’ve never tried Marmite and doubt I ever will, but Bovril is quite nice, though it doesn’t go down well with everyone. I expect it did you good when you were poorly back then in the Convent. Pleased you enjoyed the read, hugs and blessings in return, Belle

Michael Tor

Date: 9/12/2022 4:29:00 AM

ha ha will do Belle...

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/12/2022 5:19:00 AM

Thank you Michael, pleased this gave you a ha ha… Belle

Ann Peck

Date: 9/7/2022 1:53:00 PM

Great limerick, Belle, altho I haven't a clue what you're talking about :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/7/2022 3:51:00 PM

Ann if you’ve read Tom Cunningham’s poems about Soup Creek you’ll know that the local saloon is run my Jenna, Tom is the mayor, he’s very fond of marmite so this Limerick is about raising toasts at the saloon with cocktails made with marmite as the main ingredient… Belle

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/7/2022 7:52:00 AM

lol here here three cheers for you with this lovely witty write Belle :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/7/2022 8:52:00 AM

Thank you Mystic Rose, cheers to you too… Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2022 11:10:00 AM

Good one to add to the works going around about Mayor Tom and Jenna. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/6/2022 4:45:00 PM

Thank you Sara, loving the Soup Creek saga. Hope all is going well for your son, blessings Belle

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/6/2022 11:10:00 AM

Now you have given British deviants a new path to follow! Thanks for the laugh! Aloha!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/6/2022 4:41:00 PM

The British deviant? never, but always good for a laugh however. Maloha!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/6/2022 7:31:00 AM

Lovely limerick, Belle.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/6/2022 4:13:00 PM

Thank you again Victor… Pal Belle

Michael Tor

Date: 9/6/2022 5:18:00 AM

I see Tom likes this Belle enjoyed your Limerick this morning...

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/6/2022 4:12:00 PM

I’m pleased that Tom liked the Lim and that you enjoyed it too Michael. Thank you, Belle

Deb M

Date: 9/6/2022 4:54:00 AM

Great limerick Belle funny and clever!! Apart from the Marmite....can we have some Vegemite Action please Belle...not everyone at Soup Creek likes Marmud!! Hehe!! Deb x

Deb M
Date: 9/6/2022 8:56:00 PM

That’s the way to go Belle!! Debx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/6/2022 4:09:00 PM

Have to see if we can get some Vegemite action Deb, to give those who're anti Marmite some satisfaction, but could it cause a chain reaction? Belle x