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Before the sun goes down on my eyes,
And sleep should rise to life,
Here’s what I would say,
Bringing into light:

This heart of mine, this vessel,
Is pouring out, like sweating;
She’s very much a blessing,
Dressed in black; Her complexion,

To perfection, without question,
She’s a beautiful woman;
Is my heart like a flood,
Or field of blood?
Aceldama –

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Date: 8/21/2025 5:31:00 AM
Nothing like a sweating heart I always say. Jus bein honest, JT
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