Sounds of Winter

long swooning shadows
         creaking north on brittle days…
                spring is whispering 

                   *15 Jan 2015*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Adams Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Love it, David. Beautiful.
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 9:15 PM
revisiting this one. Just love that swooning shadows line. By the way are you able to do pictures? if so, your waterfall haiku would look great with an illustration. (but maybe illustrations are only for PM members?? )
Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 1:15 PM
Fine Haiku David, to me, best I've read for quite a while, nice, James :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 11:05 PM
wowowow, best haiku I have seen here maybe this whole week!!!
Gorelick Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 9:48 PM
Great! I love the shadows creaking north. BG
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