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Sounds of Violence

snake slithers venomous strike echo hisses

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/13/2020 1:51:00 PM
That's about the size of it; great Haiku.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/13/2020 2:41:00 PM
Thanks, M.L.!
Date: 2/13/2020 2:34:00 AM
Bite and gone...and you in trouble...Nice imagery
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/13/2020 2:41:00 PM
You are right! ~ Jake the Snake
Date: 2/12/2020 11:03:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku.. Like a hissing..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/13/2020 2:39:00 PM
See what you were missssssing! LOL. ~ Jake the Snake
Date: 2/12/2020 10:59:00 PM
A great haiku, vivid with action and tragedy, Gershon! Hope it wasn't fatal. :0
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/13/2020 2:35:00 PM
Me, too. Depends on the snake and the venom, I guess. Thank, Evelyn! :) Gershon

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