Sounds of the Day

Morning sounds wake sleepy heads in beds.
A thud against the wall...daddy's home, drunk!
Mommy must have given him that mommy look!
Sis and I rush to help mommy off the floor as
daddy flops across the bed with his shoes on
smelling of stale beer and cigarette's stench.

Mommy is too dizzy to finish fixing our sandwiches
of baloney for our brown bag lunch. With one punch
he laid her flat again. When will his cruelty end?
Tomorrow is Parent Teacher conferences but
they both won't show up... again. They never do.

Mean taunts from ugly kids at school, we don't listen.
We watch the clock on the classroom wall that ends
with a clattering of noisy chatter and beat up books being
joyously slammed closed then shoved into back packs
as the bell loudly rings announcing the school days end.

We walk slowly home together with dulled anticipation
to the empty sounds of no one home to greet us.
The television's voice is a welcoming distraction that
elevates our spirits with happy kids in family shows.

The best thing about T.V. dinners is no dishes to wash.
Mommy comes home from work at the diner after dark
still sporting dark sunglasses to hide daddy's shiner.
The last sounds of the day comes from mommy's singing us
old songs she remembers from her youthful years at home.

6-17-16
Connie Marcum Wong
Poem of the Day June 21, 2016
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/8/2016 11:19:00 PM
Powerful subject matter. Held my interest, Connie. :-)
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Date: 7/7/2016 7:52:00 PM
WoW! What a sad tale this is. Sometimes we get so wrapped up in the way we grew up and the problems we dealt with that we don't realize that there were others who would have gladly changed places with us. A seven from me my friend and I truly hope this is not a memory from your own childhood. God Bless, JB
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/8/2017 2:08:00 PM
It certainly is not. I was raised only by my mother. Thank you Judy. ; )
Date: 7/4/2016 1:43:00 AM
Excellent. Powerful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/3/2016 11:46:00 AM
Sad situations. I taught school for over 30 years in inner city Saginaw and know of many such conditions. What is POTD? I hear I won it whatever it is. Love, daver
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/3/2016 7:59:00 PM
It is Poem of the day daver. There is al s o POTW...Poem of the week! Thank you daver. ; )
Date: 7/3/2016 10:16:00 AM
Very sad story drawn with a very passionate pen. Such things happen in many families all over the world. Sound of brutality will never end, i feel. Congratulation on having your poem featured my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/3/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thank you very much BL. Parenting should be taught in schools. I think it would help a lot. ; )
Date: 7/2/2016 7:52:00 PM
Connie, your story poem drives home a sad, and too frequent event in too many cases. You have displayed the anguish of the wife and the children resulting from a weak drinking man. Well written.
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Date: 7/2/2016 8:35:00 PM
Thank you very much James. Happy fourth of July weekend! Cheers ; )
Date: 7/2/2016 5:38:00 PM
wow, such a powerful write here, my friend. I hope you're having a great weekend
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Date: 7/2/2016 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Jack. Happy fourth of July! ; )
Date: 7/2/2016 4:25:00 AM
Excellent narrative Connie...the sounds of a winner...congrats!!!...when is the movie coming out? lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/2/2016 4:01:00 PM
Thank you WW. I appreciate that! ; )
Date: 7/2/2016 12:30:00 AM
Hi Connie, this poem is true to life in a lot of cases, In fact I have come across a couple of families like this, there are some sick men and women out there, I bet you have struck a nerve with a few people out there, the world should read this because you really tell it as it is, well done, take care.........Vera
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/2/2016 1:59:00 AM
Thank you for such an insightful comment Vera. It is easy for people to give advice, tell the abused person to just leave, but I think when you are in a hopeless situation such as this, there is so much more than which is on the surface to be considered. Blessings, Connie ; )
Date: 7/1/2016 9:42:00 PM
I never found this gem until tonight and I am very impressed with it. I think we all eventually know someone who was raised this way, not to mention how many have personally experienced it. I like the 3rd person device, it added a raw and youthful element of sorrow to an already deeply sad subject. Ya done good, girl ... CayCay
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/2/2016 2:06:00 AM
It is so nice to hear from you CayCay. Thank you for your insightful comment my friend. I haven't been around much the past week. Blessings, Connie ; )
Date: 6/29/2016 7:28:00 AM
Wow telling it as it is for some, and you tell it oh so well, glad i have seen this...
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/2/2016 2:04:00 AM
Thank you very much Harry! ; )
Date: 6/28/2016 8:03:00 PM
well, POTD says it all, sweetie. You rock!!
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Date: 7/2/2016 2:03:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. I think I owe it to you faving this poem. I appreciate your kindness my friend! ; )
Date: 6/26/2016 10:26:00 AM
Connie, did this make the winners' list. If not, it should have!! And wow, poem of the day. SO deserving of it. Congrats for that.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/27/2016 1:18:00 PM
No, it got an N/A. Thank you so much for the encouragement Andrea. I appreciate it very much. Hugs, Connie ; )
Date: 6/26/2016 1:33:00 AM
One of the best poems I have read on this topic, makes me sad to think this is reality for some, thanks or shining light on this issue!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/26/2016 3:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Arthur. It is very sad but a reality for many. Blessings, Connie : )
Date: 6/25/2016 4:10:00 PM
Profound writing that was rightly rewarded! Congratulations dear, Connie!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/26/2016 3:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios. I appreciate your nice visit! : )
Date: 6/22/2016 4:05:00 AM
Congratulations on Poem Of The Day, Connie:) Well deserved:)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/26/2016 3:28:00 AM
Thank you very much Jo. : )
Date: 6/22/2016 2:31:00 AM
Excellent. Very deep thoughts. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/26/2016 3:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Ravi. Blessings, Connie : )
Date: 6/21/2016 3:58:00 PM
Is this your childhood?...If so I'm sorry. I was a teenage victim of what I can only call domestic insanity, and I know how hard it is. I think it made us better writers though and stronger people. Congrats on poem of the day!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/21/2016 4:15:00 PM
I agree with you. Many kids raised in my era had to deal with situations like these. I used poetic license to switch things around but I did have a dysfunctional family growing up. Thank you. ; )
Date: 6/21/2016 12:47:00 PM
- Congratulations, Connie - hugs
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Date: 6/26/2016 3:28:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. : )
Date: 6/21/2016 9:53:00 AM
Oh, Connie...so sad and deep, but oh so true for many I am sure. Your poem brings the pain the mom and kids suffer to life with your imagery. Congratulations on your poem being honored as 'Poem of the Day'! Hugs, 7 Sandra
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Date: 6/21/2016 8:10:00 AM
A deep write, so sad.
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Date: 6/21/2016 7:06:00 AM
Sadly well done Marcum, congratulations on POTD honors...
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Date: 6/20/2016 3:50:00 PM
You tell a sad tale very vividly. Hope this has not been your reality and that this is fiction. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/21/2016 4:10:00 PM
Thank you Mathew. I had humble beginnings. I took some poetic license for this write. Cheers, Connie; )
Date: 6/20/2016 2:36:00 PM
Wow, Connie.....I can't belive this poem wasn't high on the winner's list. Sadly, it was indeed dark, but terribly real to so many who have grown up in an atmosphere leaden with the fallout of stories just like this. You deserve a #7, and more!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/21/2016 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Carrie. Having it awarded POTD certainly make up for it not making the winner's list. ; )
Date: 6/20/2016 11:59:00 AM
An excellent and meaningful narrative, Connie. What a life! The sad part is that very often the victims find it hard to move away from this abusive situation. Thank you for sharing and raising awareness. I had some ex-pupils of mine like this; not easy to take action. #7+ Regards // paul
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/20/2016 1:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Paul I appreciate that. Hugs, Connected e
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