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Sounds of Seasons

Ruffling of feathers
Birds mating in the morning 
Unlocking the Spring

Cicadas singing
A midsummer symphony
Honoring the sun

Geese in formation
The squawking "V" heading south
Leading arctic fronts

Hibernating bear
Sleeps to sounds of December
Locking down Winter



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Inspired by the choka contest sponsored by Raul Moreno

Copyright © Abe Lopez | Year Posted 2009

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L'Nass Shango Date: 12/11/2009 6:12:00 AM The form accommodates well the imagery and deft poignancy of your words. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/14/2009 12:57:00 PM Beautiful poem Abe, locking all the seasons in one poem>>James Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 5/20/2009 1:00:00 PM Abe - Congratulations on placing in Raul’s, “The Sounds of Nature Contest” God Bless, MJ Login to Reply

Sandra Hudson Date: 5/15/2009 3:01:00 PM The four seasons in choka style, very clever Abe, congratulations!-AA Login to Reply

Corinne Curcio Date: 5/15/2009 10:07:00 AM Well done Abe - Not easy to do all the seasons in one little poem! Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Lena Townsend Date: 5/15/2009 9:12:00 AM A beautiful poem as I said before. Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Smiles from Lolita Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 5/15/2009 8:31:00 AM Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Abe Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/15/2009 6:16:00 AM A wonderful winning poem, Abe!! Congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest! Great job! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 5/15/2009 5:47:00 AM YAY Abe!!! Warmest congrats on your win in Raul's contest! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 5/15/2009 2:11:00 AM Abe, congrats for placing in my contest...Raul Login to Reply

Savannah Rose Harper Date: 4/21/2009 12:14:00 PM I don't know why but i like the word fidelity and lemme tell ya Choka is yo specialty Login to Reply

Darleen Bilyeu Date: 4/21/2009 11:00:00 AM lovely write Mr. L!!! you always have creative writing!!! Login to Reply

Nadia Shahwan Date: 4/21/2009 6:04:00 AM So beautiful. Choka is your line. Login to Reply

Charlene Bird Date: 4/20/2009 9:18:00 PM Simply magical writing here capturing the beauty of all seasons, very well written! Thanks you for the wonderful comments and acknowledgement on my work! Charlene Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 4/20/2009 9:14:00 AM Abe, each one alone a masterpiece of nature! Awesome writing! Good Luck! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 4/20/2009 7:10:00 AM Excellent, serene and a winning poem! Good luck Abe!!! Love, Carrie Login to Reply

Laurie Ginn Date: 4/20/2009 3:47:00 AM The last line especially gets your attention. I hope you do well in the contest, you and the squawking "V" Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 4/20/2009 2:50:00 AM Best wishes with this one Abe.& thank you for your welcome blog comments. Login to Reply

Judy Riley Date: 4/19/2009 9:57:00 PM I will look up "Choka", I am still learing alot of the types of poetry, This is a nice combination of Haikus that paint a wonderful image of Spring, and animals sleeping. Good work. Judy Riley Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 4/19/2009 9:02:00 PM Thanks for supporting my contest Abe...Raul Login to Reply