Sounds of Country Living

Sounds A fire truck whisks by sounding Like a wailing woman grieving As squeals from the train tracks Spit flaming sparks from its wheels I sat down on the porch swing Listening for life’s melody Children laughing in the house Put a smile across my face Rebellious stallions down the road Getting closer by the sound of their hoofs A banjo strumming for a barn raising Has left lingering notes in the air An old cart comes by pulled by a mule A man yells “Rags and Old Iron” for pick up The air is so busy I swore I could hear The greening grass growing beneath my feet Then the oven buzzer went off My bread is done I will listen Again another day for the wind Chimes to beckon me to the porch Carole Cookie Arnold Member Contest Sounds Frank H
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A   Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 8:46 PM
Carole, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda
Austin Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 8:47 AM
Love this one, Cookie. I just wrote one about the country. Yours is much better. Congrats on the selection. daver
Hamilton Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:20 AM
I love it hence a 7 from me well done
Guzzi Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Some fine work here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 1:23 AM
Many congratulations on your win Carol, well done xx
A   Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 8:46 PM
Carole, Congratulations!! A nice winning poem... Linda
Johnson Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 5:05 PM
This is truly well done. No. one of the 1s In my opinion.. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 2:39 PM
I love the twist you took for this contest. A delight this is!! Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 12:14 PM
Great sounds that you were hearing float upon the air..Enjoyed reading your winnng work..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Tacito Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 6:00 PM
Quite the rush of activity going on here. I love the subtle tones of wind chimes. Very soothing. A great writing! Nice job!
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