Paige Hind Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Soundlove Of Petrichor

spooning atmosphere
dust off you, lilac
eyes with you again
and the water's tight
urges in your hair

rain's attaching
us cheek to cheek
we are the same
tears as flowers

forever
drops; though a
christened fall,

raincoat,
scented

song

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sara Etgen-Baker July 30, 2026 at 5:43 PM what beautiful lines....I especiallly liked the last three. Faving this poem.

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2026 at 1:23 AM Sweet indeed. Love this one's flow

Kim Rodrigues July 22, 2026 at 7:06 PM Love that second verse, Paige!

Sam Kauffman July 22, 2026 at 12:04 PM Paige, I can hear the rain fall, christened and scented in its petrichor song. I loke the formatting of this poem as it reflects the descent of a raindrop! Blessings!

Sotto Poet July 22, 2026 at 7:38 AM Paige, your poetry is thought-provoking on the transient nature of worldly prosperity. The poem has a fantastic rhythm and rhyme scheme, which improves readability and overall flow.

Valsa George July 22, 2026 at 4:36 AM As the first rain drops fall on earth, a sweet scent rises and invades our nose- the Petrichor. Nicely done.

Andrea Dietrich July 21, 2026 at 11:23 PM One of your best this month, Paige. Nicely done

Nette Onclaud July 21, 2026 at 9:05 PM ' rain to our cheeks'... how relatable and fancy can this image be... a beauty, paige!

Nette Onclaud July 21, 2026 at 9:05 PM ' rain to our cheeks'... how relatable and fancy can this image be... a beauty, paige!

Ryan Geoffrey Hayward July 21, 2026 at 8:25 PM I love sparse poetry when its done as beautifully as this. Those first 2 stanzas in particular are very beautiful.