Sound Upbringing

memory  of  happy   childhood  ...  comfort   along   path  of  adulthood 




19/08/16
Contest: monoku madness (John Hamilton) - Win 1st place
17 styllables (howmanysyllables.com)
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Scars Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Sunita, this is beautiful...congrats on your top placement! :)-luloo
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Thanks Laura...appreciate your reading and nice comment. Hugs Sunita :)
Krampe Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 8:37 PM
yes, so true. Congrats.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Thanks for the kind comment Agnes. :) Sunita
Chansarkar Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Yes childhood is the foundation of life,lovely line Sunita!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Thanks for the read and nice comment...agree with you. :) Sunita
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Sunita, your poem embraces what we all need in this world. Beautiful! Congratulations on your well deserved first place! 7 ; )
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Well said, what parents give us, we carry throughout life! Thanks so much for the read and very nice comment :) Love Sunita
Callus Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 1:42 AM
Congratulations Sunita. A very deserved high flyinh win. Regards ... paul
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Thanks for your so kind words and for the read! :D Sunita
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Oh perfect monoku, Sunita, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 10:55 PM
Thanks for the appreciation Eve. So kind of you. Love Sunita
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 8:11 PM
BIG congrats on the win.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Thanks Andrea for all your supportive words. Love Sunita
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Sunita, congratulations on your 1st Place win in the Monoku contest! Very true and wise words! 7 Hugs, Sandra
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Thanks for appreciation Sandra. :) Sunita
Kent Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 6:46 PM
So true congrats on your Win.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Thanks for the read and nice comment. :) Sunita
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 5:33 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sunita:-) hugs Jan xx
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 10:47 PM
Thanks to dedicate your precious time stop by and the nice words. Love Sunita
Y. Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Hi Sunita, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Thanks lot for the nice words, Alexis. So glad it was appreciated. :) Sunita
Hamilton Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 3:53 PM
Really enjoyed this one thanks for entering, and congrats on a fine win!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 10:44 PM
Oh I'm so glad you appreciated it..my first trial of a monoku...Thanks John for the contest. I enjoyed it. :) Sunita
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 6:28 PM
this is fantastic. One of the best I have seen
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Hi thanks for reading and the nice comment. Glad you like it, means it works out for this form. I'm experimenting with new forms actually...:) Sunita
Turner Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 2:22 PM
This is a great one, Sunita. Good luck!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Thanks Daniel for the read and nice comment. :) Sunita
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 8:30 AM
a lovely appreciation of your childhood Sunita - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Thanks Jan. I hope it meet the rules...:D
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