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Sound Ii

SOUND II

clear night
             moon
noisy gold



so quiet
         in mid air
pin explodes



deep forest
    some hidden thing
moon cries out!



cat and bird
              my heart races
the sound of silence



early Sunday morn
               not a leaf stirs
dog barking

Copyright © Daver Austin | Year Posted 2012

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James Peranteau Date: 5/24/2012 9:36:00 AM Def. got my thoughts crackling here Dave ! Awesome write dear poet ! Have a wonderful day my friend...and I sent you Soup-mail....much love, james Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/22/2012 8:58:00 PM My favorites are 3 and 4, but all are good, Daver. Love your haiku! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/22/2012 1:15:00 PM OOo I like the noisy gold image... this is my favorite set of haikus ever... enjoyed..pd Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/22/2012 11:27:00 AM an array of stunning 'kus so descriptive and filled with toned imagery, daver.... much delighted!..:) hugggs! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/21/2012 2:45:00 PM Well, I don't think that it has been that quiet around here..I need to get up in the middle of the night and see if it is so quiet that I can hear the moon...Excellent work ..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were lifting..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/21/2012 2:31:00 PM It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Daver. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 5/21/2012 1:11:00 PM brilliant! daver! i really like your haiku. it inspires me to write more :) well done. big hugs love ya deb Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/21/2012 12:04:00 PM Bravo....well written Daver!!! - oxox Anne-Lise Login to Reply