Sound I

SOUND I genesis big bang! not a sound in the empty house night sounds startled ghost

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/10/2012 11:36:00 AM

Enjoyed these soundless happenings you describe Daver, and I hope you are feeling better.."

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/29/2012 6:04:00 PM

Now we hear it, now we don't; did it happen? Only the ghost knows, that's just how it goes.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/25/2012 5:54:00 AM

Clever and creative, Daver! I think I'd rather listen to you play the violin.."startled ghost"...oh that would be one mean bang! Love, Mikki

James Peranteau

Date: 5/24/2012 9:34:00 AM

Great write dear poet....reminds me of the question so long ago...if a tree falls in the forest and no one is around, would it make a sound? Enjoyed this write sir...off to II.....james

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2012 1:14:00 PM

Daver, i wonder how loud the bang was... that it woke the ghost... enjoyed your haikus.... pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2012 9:49:00 PM

I love the idea of a startled ghost, Daver!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2012 2:19:00 PM

Great irony here, Daver. After the "Big Bang," I doubt there was any noise as matter hurled through space. But the second one about startling a ghost -- this is the Daveer I love so much. What a kick I got reading this. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/20/2012 1:44:00 PM

i like the blending of big bang and silence.. so well portrayed,daver... wow!..:) hugggs!