Sound I

SOUND I

genesis
              big bang!
not a sound



in the empty house
               night sounds
startled ghost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/10/2012 11:36:00 AM
Enjoyed these soundless happenings you describe Daver, and I hope you are feeling better.."
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Date: 5/29/2012 6:04:00 PM
Now we hear it, now we don't; did it happen? Only the ghost knows, that's just how it goes.
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Date: 5/25/2012 5:54:00 AM
Clever and creative, Daver! I think I'd rather listen to you play the violin.."startled ghost"...oh that would be one mean bang! Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/24/2012 9:34:00 AM
Great write dear poet....reminds me of the question so long ago...if a tree falls in the forest and no one is around, would it make a sound? Enjoyed this write sir...off to II.....james
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Date: 5/22/2012 1:14:00 PM
Daver, i wonder how loud the bang was... that it woke the ghost... enjoyed your haikus.... pd
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Date: 5/21/2012 9:49:00 PM
I love the idea of a startled ghost, Daver!!
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Date: 5/20/2012 2:19:00 PM
Great irony here, Daver. After the "Big Bang," I doubt there was any noise as matter hurled through space. But the second one about startling a ghost -- this is the Daveer I love so much. What a kick I got reading this. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2012 1:44:00 PM
i like the blending of big bang and silence.. so well portrayed,daver... wow!..:) hugggs!
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