Souls Together

Two lonely Souls , One entity
I am with YOU , Are YOU with Me?
Is this a dream ;  or Reality?

Two Souls together as One
You the Daughter ; me the son
The battle over and WE have Won
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Breidenthal Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 9:45 PM
Wow. So powerful. Very uplifting to read. Keep up the amazing poetry. Always, Laura
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December 15, 2008 at 8:29 AM
Hi my new friend, Yes, I live about 45 miles from SF.. I absolutely love looking at the Golden Gate. We often take the ferry across the bay and you get the best views that way. Hope your culinary event was good. Are you a chef? Or just a "foodie" like me. BG
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December 12, 2008 at 11:25 AM
Wonderful flow to this..we al need someone to be that soul together...Thank you for you comments on my poem..I often feel I cannt write any more sad, mounful poems, but I keep coming back to them. My heart hurts today..watch out..you may get a real hum-dinger. BG
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December 12, 2008 at 7:30 AM
This sounds extremely faith filled "Dear Beautiful Brother HG!"~I hope that you are doing well this morning my dear friend?!~Your "Love For Your Wife!"~Is very admirable within all the eyes within "Heaven Where She Waits!"~And also, very admirable and true within many eyes here "Beautiful Brother!"~And as for your question? As to why I do pick poetry style? "I am in the world, but I am not of the world!"~"I Love You Hg, Always, John!"~"Happy Holidays, Brother!"~Bye:)
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