Souls Together

Two lonely Souls , One entity I am with YOU , Are YOU with Me? Is this a dream ; or Reality? Two Souls together as One You the Daughter ; me the son The battle over and WE have Won

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/29/2012 9:45:00 PM

Wow. So powerful. Very uplifting to read. Keep up the amazing poetry. Always, Laura

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/15/2008 8:29:00 AM

Hi my new friend, Yes, I live about 45 miles from SF.. I absolutely love looking at the Golden Gate. We often take the ferry across the bay and you get the best views that way. Hope your culinary event was good. Are you a chef? Or just a "foodie" like me. BG

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/12/2008 11:25:00 AM

Wonderful flow to this..we al need someone to be that soul together...Thank you for you comments on my poem..I often feel I cannt write any more sad, mounful poems, but I keep coming back to them. My heart hurts today..watch out..you may get a real hum-dinger. BG

John Rhinem

Date: 12/12/2008 7:30:00 AM

This sounds extremely faith filled "Dear Beautiful Brother HG!"~I hope that you are doing well this morning my dear friend?!~Your "Love For Your Wife!"~Is very admirable within all the eyes within "Heaven Where She Waits!"~And also, very admirable and true within many eyes here "Beautiful Brother!"~And as for your question? As to why I do pick poetry style? "I am in the world, but I am not of the world!"~"I Love You Hg, Always, John!"~"Happy Holidays, Brother!"~Bye:)