Tahera Mannan Poet Free verse

Soul's Ecstasy

A crystal cup
Warm hot chocolate
Topped with cool Vanilla ice
Swirls of fruits danced around
A dollop of rich cream on top
Tongue about to experience ecstasy
A tiny dirty hand stretched
Hungry eyes bored into mine
The crystal shook and wobbled
The glass was passed
He licked the cream and tasted delight
The soul found ecstasy

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 23, 2011 at 12:46 PM Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Tahera. Love, Carol

Constance La France February 19, 2011 at 6:11 AM This poem is so visual and well written, and so heartwarming, and congratulations on your win~~

Audrey Haick February 14, 2011 at 4:38 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest, Tahera. Love this too. I enjoy your work. I love the imagery in this...so natural. Always, Annalise

Kory Calhoun February 12, 2011 at 2:32 PM Hi Tahera - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory

Nette Onclaud February 12, 2011 at 3:02 AM ectatic it is, tahera!! sweet CHEERS for the huge win..:) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 11, 2011 at 5:27 PM Congrats Tahera my friend on your success in Debbie's contest with this powerful write and entry luv... enjoy another success tonight..with luv..

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2011 at 2:04 PM Ahhhh, what a sweet delight this ended up being. In more ways than one! Glad to have seen this one today as I get ready to go back home for the day! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 9, 2011 at 7:27 AM Truly awesome write Tahera my friend.. if this is for the new free verse contest this is already a top ten piece luv.. will have to work on mine today ... magical..with luv..

Samir Georges February 9, 2011 at 12:11 AM A wonderful exploration into the subjectivity of experience. I have been told I have a mastery with diction, but it seems my skill wanes in comparison to such beautiful weaving of every thread in this enlivening tapestry.