Soul's Ecstasy

A crystal cup
Warm hot chocolate
Topped with cool Vanilla ice
Swirls of fruits danced around
A dollop of rich cream on top
Tongue about to experience ecstasy
A tiny dirty hand stretched
Hungry eyes bored into mine
The crystal shook and wobbled
The glass was passed
He licked the cream and tasted delight
The soul found ecstasy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/23/2011 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 6:11:00 AM
This poem is so visual and well written, and so heartwarming, and congratulations on your win~~
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Tahera. Love this too. I enjoy your work. I love the imagery in this...so natural. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:32:00 PM
Hi Tahera - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 2/12/2011 3:02:00 AM
ectatic it is, tahera!! sweet CHEERS for the huge win..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:27:00 PM
Congrats Tahera my friend on your success in Debbie's contest with this powerful write and entry luv... enjoy another success tonight..with luv..
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Date: 2/9/2011 2:04:00 PM
Ahhhh, what a sweet delight this ended up being. In more ways than one! Glad to have seen this one today as I get ready to go back home for the day! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/9/2011 7:27:00 AM
Truly awesome write Tahera my friend.. if this is for the new free verse contest this is already a top ten piece luv.. will have to work on mine today ... magical..with luv..
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Date: 2/9/2011 12:11:00 AM
A wonderful exploration into the subjectivity of experience. I have been told I have a mastery with diction, but it seems my skill wanes in comparison to such beautiful weaving of every thread in this enlivening tapestry.
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