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Soulmates

************************************************************************* Returning from the nightclub; in San Francisco for the weekend; sharing a suite Within the eighth floor highrise; best of friends for many years; hidden secret Emotions; always present and ever felt; beauty, but both of us to shy to share Until this glorious evening in an innocent dance; she whispered into my dreams... Closing the door quickly behind us; joyfully removing one another dresses until We were both bare; reaching for my yearning breast to touch; I gasping for air Beautiful her caress; pulling her close to taste her lips in, the deepest french kiss Time stood still and everything became perfect; laying her gently atop the pillows Her silkened hair as a glittering goddess; always loving her, but I did not dare... Kissing the nap of her neck; slowly sliding down her velvet treasure; sweet pleasure In rose petals of perfume; filling our senses amid desires, longing to be set free Bathed within these showers our destiny; soothing rain yet burning in these veins Gliding her fingers through my hair; the vanilla scent inside, her creamful thighs... Arching unto the sky her cry sliding, my tongue into her love; swirling and twirling The colours of utopia as she quivered and shook; clutching tighter my heart; soft Whispers once more, into my dreams; turning off the lights; a new day dawning Warmth inside her arms; tasting my lips calling her name; evermore, her beauty... ************************************************************************* ..."SoulMates" *

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Date: 6/14/2012 10:47:00 AM
This is sweet.a true love found again..its always precious. Wonderful write Sarah. And thanks so much for your kind comments. :) ~always&forever Lynette
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:51:00 AM
Goodbye John :) I feel better about it now. take good care, good luck with your writing, I didn't want much, just a hug once from you, sorry it didn't work out brother, Sincerely, Cindy
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Date: 1/18/2012 2:35:00 PM
hmmm, johhny, sarah, and rachael, pile em up and shoot em out, cali girls.... I AM KIDDING God loves all, and so do I love you uh, sarah, yeah, that's it, thought you left.? many want the site clean.
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Lucinda Cayton
Date: 1/23/2012 1:04:00 PM
promotor.
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Lucinda Cayton
Date: 1/23/2012 1:03:00 PM
I know many wanna, but I do not and it really bothers me. to walk alone, an angel lied? thats not possible. no Johns but you Babe John where ever you are. I had like a herd of men searching the hills for me cause of the internet, some going down wrong roads, probably some never made it back from whereever they came from. I got kicked out of the nearest town. Chief told me to go and not come back and tell my protor that too! He was peed off! 25 acres, he will arrest me if I go for gas that route.
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Date: 1/19/2012 11:32:00 AM
‡ Many, Want You to Lay Down ¥ And Give Them The Joy of Your Sweeetness ¥ My Sweeet Luv ¥ Rachael ‡
Date: 1/11/2012 12:04:00 PM
where are u sweet serah..this was so romntic and heartfelt...hope u and ur friend find love and peace as always///I was so much tuched bu this peace , I shall always pray for ya....love and hugs all the way...cheers !!!!!!!!!
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Date: 1/4/2012 3:41:00 AM
very nice Sarah :)
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Date: 12/27/2011 12:43:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a bit of you Sarah,very well written. OXOX hugs from Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/13/2011 12:35:00 PM
Dear Sarah, you put so much of your self into what you write and I can feel the emotion you describe. Life seems to wrap us in dreams at times which may be better than reality. Hope you have a wonderful holiday season. Love, Elizabeth
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Jl Sadberry
Date: 12/13/2011 12:59:00 PM
Unning around here pretending like your a thousand different men HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA * HYPOCRITS *Try not to play the phomey baloney ???? Alright!! * R
Date: 12/13/2011 9:27:00 AM
A sensuouuuuuus write.Thanks for your comments at my pages.
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Date: 12/12/2011 10:44:00 PM
Sarah Your piece is so full of details and imagination. It is passionately written, activating the 5 senses! Thank you for visiting my work again. Your comments inspire me to enjoy poetry and connect always to this website and to our beloved co- soupers. May you have a wonderful holiday season with your special someone you so beautifully described in your poem!
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Date: 12/12/2011 9:41:00 PM
wow Sarah, this is a very passionate write.. i love it!!! Very beautiful....smiles....chiquita :-)
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Date: 12/29/2011 6:18:00 PM
* "DID I EVER TELL YOUR SWEEET BEAUTY * HOW VERY BEAUTIFUL * YOU ARE * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV." *
Date: 12/12/2011 5:23:00 PM
i can see that you are a very passionate writer who has the rare gift of being able to put all of the feelings on paper and make it flow, make it enjoyable and entertaining, thank you for sharing this pleasurable piece with me :)
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Date: 12/12/2011 1:27:00 PM
such twirl of sweet sensuality, sarah.. i go dreamy with this; lovely, lovely!.. finally wrote 2 new pieces now... thanks for your warmth! :) huggs
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Date: 12/12/2011 12:08:00 PM
What a wonderful tribute to your soulmate, thank you for your kind comments on Mine King. I always enjoy your work as well.
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Date: 12/12/2011 11:12:00 AM
You do erotica very well Sarah, Very tasteful and full of love.
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Date: 12/12/2011 9:44:00 AM
This is very beautiful, I like the flow and your magical words, Sarah. :)
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Date: 12/12/2011 8:32:00 AM
Beautiful and passionate write, Sarah.
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Date: 12/12/2011 5:40:00 AM
beautiful insight to your inner passion, sarah, love this, harry
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Date: 12/11/2011 8:04:00 PM
this is a beautiful piece you create and hold within, Sarah. nothing can be said further, soulmates are simply wonderful! thanks for stopping by and your kind comments.
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Date: 12/11/2011 11:42:00 AM
This is a very interesting poem in your use of punctuation, and I really like its formating. Also good is how you made your descriptions, so that the reader had to fill in the blanks themself. Thank you for commenting on my poem, though I am sorry to say I couldn't really understand most of what you said.
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Date: 12/11/2011 10:12:00 AM
such a soft and beautiful poem,,,of love and desire,,,forever it binds us in its soul,,,,,,,the experience of love,,,deep in its passion of touch,,so to excite the reader,,,its inspirations,,, are the union of its endless,,,bounderies,,,,,,,forever....................
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Date: 12/10/2011 4:15:00 PM
It kept me on the edge of my s eat through the whole verse. A fantastic range of emotions to deal with dear writer. You hgave your all in this one. So special, luv Lizzie
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Date: 12/10/2011 1:44:00 PM
Oh my you have been busy Sarah Love this :) Dawnie..x Thank you for your comments on my poem x
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Dawn Mclaughlin
Date: 1/13/2012 7:54:00 AM
Goodbye Sarah ...x
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Dawn Mclaughlin
Date: 1/2/2012 11:57:00 AM
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Date: 12/25/2011 6:27:00 AM
* "THANK YOU SWEET JOURNEY * I DO LOVE HER * 'MERRY CHRISTMAS' * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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Journey Mcknight
Date: 12/19/2011 11:40:00 AM
I am leaving the soup on good terms, appreciate your friendship now john, sincerely, Cindy
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Journey Mcknight
Date: 12/14/2011 8:45:00 AM
good luck with you and yours dawnie, have a blessed Christmas.
Date: 12/10/2011 1:20:00 PM
Interesting work..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 12/10/2011 11:51:00 AM
WOW! SARAH, VERY TASTY... AND RINGS WITH DEEP BEAUTY... ENJOYED,. HAVE A SPLINDID DAY,..P.D.
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Date: 12/30/2011 3:23:00 PM
* . . "SOOOO I KISSSSED YOU * BECAUSE I LOVE YOU" . . *
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Date: 12/29/2011 6:40:00 PM
* "ONE ROSE * TWO ROSES * THREE ROSES * I WOULD GIVE YOU THE WORLD IN ROSES * TO SPEND MY LIFE * EVERMORE * MAKING LOVE TO YOU * MY BEAUTIFUL SWEEET BEAUTIFUL * BEAUTIFUL LINDA * I LUV YOU * MY BEAUTIFUL BELOVED * 'YOUR SARAH.'" *

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